Can you please update again? This is freaking amazing!

I thought it was cool how you decribed her just like she was in the movie, mature but innocent. The short summary of how their different point of views was interesting, it seemed like you could find out their personality by reading how they think. It is easy to tell what the whole plot is going to be though by looking at Ren's feelings, and Ariel thinking about what her boyfriend would say. But it's great how you incorperated Ren's love toward Ariel the first time he saw her and I think you could really add more

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