OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
TAZ SLEPT WITH UP?!

To GoodByeFromMe:
I KNOW RIGHT! I always like respect Yellofang and all, and now it's all over again with Taz and atuff

I ran down towards her and Up ran the other way towards February.
Isn't Up the one talking? Other than that, this was awesome.

Oooooooo cliffhanger! I'm quickly falling in love with this story and I hope you update it really quickly!

Aww. This chapter is so bittersweet and wonderful!

Yay! Singing! I'm glad you kept that part in. It's a challenge to fit it in a scene and still keep the scene dramatic, but you actually managed to. Good job.

I love it when you bring up Gabrielle, its so sweet :) When will she tell Up that he did have a child at one point? HE DESERVES TO KNOW!

She was dimly aware of Tootsie and Specs fangirling over Up,
Best. Line. Ever.
Keep it up!

This is really good. Almost perfect canon. And this is coming from a starkid who is OBSESSED WITH CANON and STARKID.
-DracosCookie

I like Taz and Krayonder's relationship. By relationship, I don't mean that romantically, I mean the sort of alliance they have, with Taz bullying him, but they're also sort of friends. Anyway, I don't know how you worked it out exactly, but I like it.

Great update :) although extremely sad

So sad! But great writing. And I understand about school.

Oh God, oh God, OH GOD! You can't just leave it there, I am a slightly emotional wreck right now! The baby! What will happen to her? You can't leave me with these questions!

Great update :) can't wait for more :)

Ahh eee! THIS IS SO GOOD! I'm honestly so excited for the next chapter :) Please update soon, or I will die of antici...pation!