now this is how i wish the real series ended! love this story

This is your first one? Very well done! You have a lot of talent! I hope you keep writing. You can only get better from here. Awesome piece, here. I'm a HUGE Gargoyles fan and I think you definitely captured everyone's character here. Keep up the good work. You have a real knack for it. Great job!

Well, I found this one buried back around page 11 of 14 in my email inbox, and, since you said that it is your first fanfic, I decided to stop and read, just to see your 'beginnings'.

Well, my friend, I now see why I love your stories. You are upbeat, optimistic, loving and looking for all the best in an imperfect world...as I try to do (well, most of the time, anyway). This is a sweet story, full of promise and emotion. Lots of writers handle negatives fairly well...but you almost have to be a cockeyed optimist (the BEST kind...I love 'em to death) to write the good stuff well and consistently well.

I notices it among my alerts, so I think that one of the next things I tie up with (so to speak) will be Shadow Goblin's Revenge...I'm interested in whether it's an "up" or "down" story, and how well you handle it. Don't worry my friend...I love your work enough that I seriously doubt that you could write something that I wouldn't like, for one reason or another.

Oh, yeah, THIS one's on my favorites list, too...and with the two new TiPo stories and this, that should bring your story count up to 25 there...which is the ALL-TIME high for a single author from this site. The next highest one has only 8 stories...YEAH, kiddo, I LOVE your work!

Take care and be well. Ja ne for now.

"Tux"

Good oneshot

I second what ADL1212 said. It does feel a little rushed towards the end, but it's a good first shot. Can't wait for more!

I really want you to continue this. I love Goliath and Elisa! This was good.