AHHHH! You can't place an author note as a chapter! It tricks the reader into thinking there was an update!

This story always leaves me in a daze-A tragic thrill and so much depth into the characters-more importantly the main one that's your own character-If no one had ever seen 'Horror Story and read this, whether or not Lucy was a canon would be out of question-Your original characters are solidified beauties-just magnificant writing and storytelling-Your incorporation of Lucy into the scene with Jude on the brink of death was chill-inducing and had a sort of bitter sweetness at the fact Lucy(fer) had been her guardian angel-And then the scene with Timothy-executed so excellently (loved that scene, could imagine the confrontation between the two and Lucy's ultimatum alongside the dark intentions with her would-be daughter and that scene with Lana literally frightened me-being generally freaked out by dolls the thought of Lucifer turning Lana into a voodoo doll with button eyes-no-Just no-so creepy-And the end-Totally speechless (rereadrereadreread)-Brilliant storytelling-This whole story was just mindblowing-The end with the voice of his mother in his head leading him onto a path lit with darkness-Truly amazing writing

.love. This whole story, fantastic ending, just brilliant

Well I'm speechless. That scene with Frank left chills down my arms with 'the blood is the life' and the newspaper clipping and the paragraph at the end and before that, the baby coming and the way Oliver was caught and killed by the police was excellent, this escalated smooth and deadly-the final scene between Johnny and Andorra with Lucy/Lucifer and Oliver in the shadows as spirits was so spine-tingling-Did not expect that at all, Johnny being shot and seeing his mom with "We'll be one, big, happy family." and them being cast into the shadows and forever earthbound-insanely creepy. This was one hell of a story-Brilliant work with incisive research-I learned quite a bit from this-truly among the best reads on here.

I love it so far!

This is getting so intense-Love the way you captured Sister Eunice/Azazel's end and how you incorporated Lucifer into Arden's death was brilliant-Hiciste un magnifico trabajo!

I absolutely love how you have recreated this story and made it your own like you wrote the script for the series, and I love how created a sort of twisted mother/lover portrayal of Lucy with Dr Thredson. Please continue this story as soon as possible and if it is not to much trouble could you create a bit of a tender moment between Lucy and Oliver? Anyway stay awesome!

The scene between Johnny and the therapist discussing his rage about his mother and her voice among others in his head was amazing-Reading this story always feels like a continuation from the show-Leaning toward his mother really talking to him because of this '"Satan never dies," he replied in a matter of fact tone that filled her with slight fear, "Only the body that he decides to inhabit."' Oh man if I were that lady, probably would freeze up in fear too, scream. And this '"Mother doesn't like you very much."' to top off that segment was just...no words, loved the way it started off-so awesome and it gets better and better. Love the way you dipped into Arden's head with his interaction with Sr Eunice and almost like back to back from Johnny and the therapist discussing how dreams were like memories and Arden awaking from his visit from the dark wells of dreamland. And then after running off we find Lucy in the park in which she shares the company of her possession with Martin, his life flashing before her and after he shares some wisdom with her him gaining his vision back with a tender moment of consideration-Eunice is pushing Kit to take her down and the child-That last part, with glimpses of Lucy in this possession having a breakdown was brilliant!-maybe a mixture of both coming to terms and forgiveness-A work of such depth and mind-blowing thoughtfulness

I wonder if his mother is really talking to him?
I loved the breakdown, it really puts you inside this character. She walks a thin line between love and hate and I like this. It shows that she loved God and stook by his side and now she is so angry with him that she hates him.
"I'll win this time" sent shivers down my spine.
And the whole scene with her and the blind man I cried, I literally cried. And then she let him see again. It was very Jesus like. She is such a complex character. I think you should really write a novel on this. I would reaad it

I like how she isn't calling herself the devil now. She's introducing herself as an angel.
I also love how you have her looking away from the cross and running away. And the whole thing with the almost miscarriage, nice to see because it reminds us that she is still i s human and must deal with human body problems. Very smart.
Love the "Someone's at the door"? I'm really curious at how you will go about this. It's a scary thing to see. You never know who is at the door and that works on a more emotional level for me. You never know if someone on your doorstep is the devil or not or if they mean you ill intentions. Very smart. I love that symbolism. You use it a lot in this story. Love it.

Doing excellent with this! So awesome to see Timothy here interacting with Lucyfer-And the scene with Leigh-Loved the twist of the current day session with Johnny as Lucy'll bear him now-back to theorizing-Intense chapter (really sorry this is late!-pc got a virus and been MIA for a few days, but it's all clear now) Update SOON

i love how you have the devil playing these little mind tricks. very clever indeed pretty lady. I loved that Pontius Pilate reference. you've really done your HW on this and I love you for that. and i love that Thredson freaked out because she had left, i think that he would do that in such a situation. i mean it just seems in his character now that he has the mother that he never had in his life he'd be really upset if she left even for a few hours.
how she changes her voice is amazing. i really love that.
i'm also catching on that Lucifer is taking over her in big ways (like the disappearinf act) but yet Lucy is still there. i like that she seems to be okay with him in it.
Also why do you go back and forth between he and she when referring to the devil? Are you doing it to show that the devil can be both in any given situation? Anyways whatever it is it is great.

So Lucifer wiped Lana's memories of the vision away-The way her eyes turned black and then normal again-Oh man that scene with Arden's mind playing tricks from his nazi days was brilliant!-gave me chills-Loved the part where she's telling Oliver about the 'sob stories' and how she accounted the plan in action to him despite him insisting she'd used and abused him...come on, dude...between who the authorities would believe between Lucy or Oliver-"Are you going to tell them that I, just a thin little woman, raped you in order to bring in a demon child," she laughed harshly, "You really think they'll believe you? I mean look at me, I'm a gorgeous fiend! They'd laugh at you and throw you into Briar Cliff and guess who will be your doctor!" that would be INSANE!-She makes a winning case..."You're not the only enemy," he informed her as he pulled her from the floor and onto her feet, "You just happen to be the one I'm focusing on right now. Next is that little sexy doctor Lucy." eeeeeiiiiii! They took care of his ass...your twist with Frank-revived with a promise!-Love the note you ended on with the last bit-was perfect!-(still gotta see AG)-Excellent chap!-Looking forward to the next one...

Lucy escaped!-with the plan in action-Interaction between Lucy-fer and ol' Santa was so friggin creepy!-And then her back and forth with Azazel was epic-"And the little journalist that escaped and returned in a stretcher," he whispered as he watched her stop quickly, "is dreaming of the Lucy and Dr. Thredson. She's saying that they are bringing in a creature of the most unholy and I can't help but notice her expanding stomach." Holy crap. Monologue from her was great-her and Sister Jude going to take down the demon in Sr Eunice-But then there's Thredson to insert himself into the equation-unfinished business with Lucy? Or did something else happen? Now that Sister Jude is aligned with Lucy, maybe the door'll hit Arden on his way out-Update SOON

3. Seriously! Whoa! My new guilty pleasure on Wednesday after AHS:Asylum.