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You should end the story by aido apologizing and akemi making him say I love you to him do then they get back and ends with them saying they will be together forever

I think aido should explain wht happened between him and shizuka, they make up or brake up and leave it at that, atleast there will be a ending:) hope this helps

This stpry was well written but it saddened me how you just gave it a quick and very short ending. That honestly made me a bit upset.

i loved the story but the ending was rreeaallyy rushed. I've read your other stories an know that you can right a good ending

Well, I really enjoyed your story until I came to the ending chapter. It's cute don't get me wrong, but it just kind of has this feeling of "I'm done writing this story so here's an ending." It's a bit anticlimactic, and left me with too many unanswered questions. It really is a shame, I loved your story and up until that last chapter there really were so many possibilities for the storyline. 'Tis a pity, oh well.

Awww that was such a cute story! it was amazing! NICE WORK!:D

Really it just started getting good and you had to go and end it! NOOOOOO I WANT TO KNOW ABOUT THEIR FUTURE! XD Other then that I loved the story 3

Awww cute ending

Kana gonna crush them! Yay!
Update soon!

Awww Akemi is so sweet to Hanabusa _ hehe XD and KANAME DON'T HIT HIM...again... :P hehe Update more!

Awww Hanabusa! And I'm so surprised that Kaname didn't slap Hanabusa _ hehe XD love it!

Aido is a Baka! Baka Baka Baka!

Awwww Takuma, manga and anime for a win! hehe XD Update!

the story started off weird with the vampire slayer but got better