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this is very very cute! especially the last paragraph =D
and yay, Misty won the whirlpool cup!! =)

It was very cute. I liked it a lot. And I liked the humorous ending thing about the hat. ;)
It was-as they would say now-"tight".

It was kinda cute. I think you should write a sequel.

cuuuute!

Nice one. I've never been very good at symbolism, but I think I get it. You're a great writer.

Aww! So Kawaii!!! *Maura*

Cute. ^_^. I smiled while reading this.

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awwwww!! that was too kawaii! i love pikachu! "Just because a guy chooses licking himself as a way of maintaining personal hygiene, he's automatically labeled a dumb animal" lol I love this!

Aww...Heeee...Did you have to go and say who won the Whirlpool Cup? :/ That's all I'm complaining about, mwah, but I should've guessed, cuz Ash only has one water type...*sweatdrops* Umm...Yeah. Oh yeah! Almost forgot, hehe..Cute fic! That was...cute! Can't think of another word, heee...Wa...Ummm...hee...Tat's all *^_^*;;;

AWWWWW! That was so sugary sweet! I loved it! *blinks* Wait a sec, I just read this at the Pokémon Tower! LOL!! Welp, now I kin review! ^.^ Keep writing!

Good story my friend very good indeed. Short and sweet, just the way I like 'em...and you even managed to fit in a couple dodgy lines....
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"Priiiii!!!!" cries Togepi excitedly as Misty tries for the 100th time today to fit her now
extremely shiny trophy into her overly stuffed backpack.(Is that what they call it nowadays?)


"It just won't fit Togepi,"(Hope she has better luck on her wedding night with Ash) Misty states dejectedly while Ash's backpack manages to catch
her eye.
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Sorry bout that, couldn't resist. Anyway nice story once again, original.......keep up the good work.

How sweet!! Loved the ending!!! ^_^