Great job so far, love to see more
keep it up
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OMG! I totally can't wait until the next chapter comes out! (No pressure, though) ;
I didn't expect to love this story so much!
Seriously, you've done a great job. :)

I'll admit, I was a little hesitant about this, seeing as it's a POV fic of Clementine, and I wasn't sure if you'd be able to do it. But actually I think you did pretty well. Also, Clem isn't like a normal 9 year old, she's pretty smart, so that might make it a little easier on you. Or perhaps not, but the point is that you did pretty well.

Also, I also happen to be a sap and was equally a bit disappointed that you couldn't tell Clem that you love her, but "I'll miss you" is close enough, I guess.

Anyway, good work so far.

Hey man! Great story! I'm really looking forward to the next chapters! While reading I shed some tears, manly tears of course! It made me so emotional and I can honestly say your story is the first to do that to me lol

God they have alot of supplies, hopefully they keep it but i guess if a plot twist happened and they lost alot of food would actually be good to have. Spice up the story with tragedy and tears i love it when people do that. And poor Clementine :c having to remember those moments. It makes me tear up whenever i think about it. It just makes me really miss Lee, and Lucas is so kind comforting Clementine. Plus Vert seems like such a nice guy!

The last sentence made my heart break and i just feel so sorry for Clementine and all i want to do is hug her and tell her everything is alright and that Lee is actually still alive. Speaking of being alive i wonder what happened to Omid and Christa? Well if they appear in the story XD

I'm happy to see another great chapter! And i look forward to the next one too :D

ohhhh what will happen nexxxxt!? :D

I absolutely loved this chapter! Keep up the awesome work!

O_o a voice? Hmmm...Was she hearing a voice in her mind? Like maybe Lee? Or is there a creepy dude in there or by the door or something? Or maybe these guys are like the St. Johns, and she heard the voice of one of their victims? Just random questions that popped into my head at the end of the chapter.

Clemintine is so cute! :)

...Loved it! I read like four sentences and started crying though... ;_;

I like it, keep it up :D

she gone mad and it lee :P

Wow, this is great. I can't wait to see what happens to Clementine next! (:
I'm really glad you included 'ghost' Lee at the end of this chapter. I find it really adds to the story.
Anyways, enough of my babbling. Please, keep the wonderful stuff coming!

Please continue this is awesome

Excellent work altogether. Your writing style is excellent, especially at provoking emotions. Was surprised that Clem was able to keep her gun with no fuss, thought some of the others would have just seen a little girl too irresponsible to hold a gun rather than a hardened young girl who has probably more experienced and has seen more things than all of them combined.
All in all, great work. Keep it up.
-Trigg