|Reviews for Heir Apparent|
| jetsly 11/25/12 . chapter 1
Instead of flooding the site with a few hundred words here and there, might I suggest that you try your hand at longer chapters that give you a chance to portray your favorite character in some depth? And you should also get some help with grammar and syntax. There are no less than seven such errors in the first paragraph of this piece.
| murphycat 11/25/12 . chapter 1