I cannot believe this is your first time writing! This is amazing. I will be checking everyday for another update! :D

Can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm enjoying this! Thanks for continuing! :)

Lovely chapter! There were a few lines there that really made me smile.I hope the next update comes soon!

What a way to end that chapter...but I look forward to reading the next!

Really enjoying this story so far! Please update soon :)

Yes, you certainly will torture us, won't you?

Oh I really like this fanfic! Great chapter, well written and I'm really looking forward for the next update! :-)

Oh you evil woman! Loving this story! where in england are you? Have you been watching x factor?! SorI know thats not actually new girl rel
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I can't wait for chapter 2! Amazing start!

I really enjoyed this and hope you continue!

Like another reviewer, I too loved the little bit about seeing her in the morning and instantly waking up. Just really a great and clever little line!

Can't wait for the next update! :)

Great job at writing what was going on in his head , I myself have a bit of a challenge when writing nick, I feel like Jess is a bit easier to write, any who great start looking forward to reading more, update soon.

I really like this chapter, I can't wait to see where you go with this! Great job.

My favorite part:

"Now, he didn't just look at her in the morning thinking 'wow that dress is too yellow for a time this early in the day', he looked at her and instantly woke up."

That was just perfect! :)

If you continue, I will read! :)

Wow I really enjoyed this! Well written and nice start. Can't wait to find out what happens next :-)

I LOVED this! So well written, and fits in so well with the main story. Can't wait for the update :-) x