Poor Clem. Losing her parents and Lee in one day must've just killed her.

Now are these people (besides the obvious) OCs or Canon from the comics or something? :3 I've played the game and watched the show, but I haven't touched on the comics just yet. Either way they are pretty awesome so far, I'm just wondering.

Anyways, amazing job!

Oh heavens. I hope its Clem. That last line gave me the chills. . . just the way you used it. . .

I'm scared now. I'm getting my dad's aluminum baseball bat.

Psh, d'aww. I love those two. :) good description and everything once again!

Oh goodness me, Lee. My heart is sad now. I loved him so much. He was a wonderful protagonist. It was a shame he had to go. . . RIP dude. RIP.

Now the characterization is still stunning, and the detail is pretty dang good. Smashing work.

I was not disappointed in the slightest! Excellent start, and believable too. I assume Molly set up the bridge for them, knowing where they were headed before she bailed town? Makes sense to me! Or maybe she just put the note there, and the bridge had been there from her lootings all across town.

Anyways, its looking great. Amazing detail. At some point you said: "Christa aided him up." but the up was not needed :) that's the only thing I could see. Awesome work.

Awesome awesome awesome. I'm tingling already in anticipation for this great story.

. . . Oh gosh. My Immortal got to my head. MUST. READ. AMAZING. FICTION.

I'll start here!

:D can't wait!

hi BIG FAN here plzzzzzz update soon
xoxoxoxoxo

Errrgg oc's that are important character s

I really love this! I'm so happy that clems safe. I was wondering if you were gonna bring Molly into the story?

I really love the small tid bts you throw in here and there to really give us a taste of Omid and Christa's relationship. It was something somewhat jumped over in the game and I love that you've fleshed it out. Love the story. Please update soon.

Cant wait to see how clem's relationship to christa and omid improve I really wanted to see them as a family! Update soon

AHHHH I LOVE IT! Chromid is my OTP sigh..and I miss Clemmy Cloo :( this is amazing though! Please update!

I like the banter between the characters, but my fave parts are when we focus on Christa Omid. I'm also interested in their eventual journey relationship with Clementine. Good job!

loving it so far :)

Dude thiz iz awezome! I love thiz plz update! Ur da best, thnks.