It's OBSESSED, not absessed. If you aren't going to take the time to proofread like you do your Percy Jackson ones, just don't bother posting, okay?!

Given that your chapters are so short, there's really no excuse for you not proofreading them and making sure everything is spelled right.

How does this story with so little words/plot get more reviews than mine?! When there's drama & action in every corner in mine! ?

This has potential, but:

1. Work on your grammar.
2. New paragraph when a character speaks.
3. Needs to be longer.
4. Needs more detail.

It's amazing your Percy Jackson stories are better written.