| Reviews for Twin Trouble:The Beginning |
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Jacey 1/12/13 . chapter 4 Ohh! This is hilarious on so many levels! :D love it! |
The Beautiful Filth 1/5/13 . chapter 4Please continue :D I want more pranks! |
The Beautiful Filth 1/5/13 . chapter 3OMG this is so funny! xD |
Juliette 12/16/12 . chapter 1 Hahahahahaha that was hilarious XD Like Amy said "Poor Natara" ;) I love the twins! Their so funny and ado-ra-ble :D Update soon! |
DizzyRedhead 12/15/12 . chapter 4Hmmmmmm...Natara seems to have a problem with liquid dessert toppings...;) |
Crimson Endings 12/6/12 . chapter 3Haha,oh my gosh,this was so funny Lexi! I can't wait to read more! -Tori:) |
Crimson Endings 11/30/12 . chapter 2Haha,this was so funny Lexi! Can't wait for more! -Tori:) |
DizzyRedhead 11/29/12 . chapter 2The twins are cute but at ten months the majority of infants cannot walk without support from someone older or leaning against a table of something like that, so Natara most likely would not have let her *walk* in on her own, and also most babies at ten months can't say more than one word. |
bugreid 11/25/12 . chapter 1 This was hilarious! I love Natara's random mood swings! One minute she's all "I love you Mal." *bats eyelashes* then the next she's like "I HATE YOU! GO FALL IN A SHARK PIT!" Lol! XD |
The Sarcastic Polar Bear 11/26/12 . chapter 1I'd like to give you advice. When the speaker changes, start a new paragraph. Like this: "I'm a peanut!" the banana said. "No, you're a banana," the toe argued. "I like soup," the floor announced. |
DizzyRedhead 11/26/12 . chapter 1Why E and C on the booties? Lol at the mood swings. Natara's usually so calm, I think that a pregnancy would make her through-the-roof hormonal. JanELLE and ELLEn. Nice names |
Crimson Endings 11/26/12 . chapter 1Poor Mal...Nat abuses him! Aww,baby girls! Love those names by the way! Awesome chapter,Lexi! -Tori:) |