Nice

I like Ginny's thought process. My only complaint is that some of your rhymes are forced and come out as non-sequiturs. If you could work on that it would flow much better.

"So clear to me it seemed/That this wasn't just chance/This was something beyond us/Something more than what we knew"
I really like this, I think you've captured a very real feeling here.

I also like how you speak in terms of contradictions -- heaven and hell, love and hate.

that was pretty good

better than i could do

aah u should plez plez plez make a story to go w/ these poems! that would be so cool!

It has so much mean to, Great story!

It has so much mean to, Great story!

It's different, but I like it!

is this it is it over? Or is there more to come? I'm all confused!!

Liked these too. I love when people to his/her stories and stuff. Good poems too! Nice little twist with them using the same lines at the end! Hahaha!! I'll stop writing now, as I think I have reviewed enough for one day. Heehee!

That's really good! It really shows how the two would feel!

hey luved those poems ur great at ritin for ur age 2 tell u the truth im pretty young meself and im startin 2 rite...neway not bout me CONTINUE UR SEQUEL 2 PEN PALS...did i tell u tht pen pals was a crack up hehehhe i was lmao
~AA' menealle nauva calen ar' malta~
a lil elven encouragement lol

Just give up on poetry, love, you're hurting my eyes.

Nice poems. Its funny how they both used the same last line.

A perfect set of poems! I really love your writing style, ma'am!! Keep up the great work! :D