interesting.

Good beginning! I look forward to reading more of this from you.

The types of stories where the main characters just kill people for the hell of it, make it hard to sympathize with them or even care.

Mainly make me wish for someone to come along and off them. Canon Bella is selfish enough.

ohhh let's see were u gonna move ur story... can said if it interesting and all... but let's see.. and part II was like whooahhh! amazing... splendid twist! lol

woah! ) i like it! update soon! i'm interested in knowing what happened with the cullens? is it when edward abandoned her except this time they didnt come back?