Very Sweet.

wow! that was so good! i almost started crying. i really must read the last 20 or so books.

pity you can't read them online!

Sapphire

aw -tear- thats so sad, tear jerker, i LOVE rachel & Jake bonding fics, its so sweet. but i love R/T ..._

Well, I don't usually read short fics, and even if I do they usually suck, but man, this wasn't half bad. Bravo. Write some more good ones, aright? Make a name for short fics! lol. Peace.

that was very sweet, I'm not a very emotional person and I hae crying but I started to at the end of this. But you're right, Rachel would hate having a huge memorial

aw! how cute! i almost cried! ( i am being completly serious)

This was a really good fic...very sweet, very nice.

*wipes eyes* That was so cute! i didn't know Tobias had blue eyes. I aprecciate the... never mind. nice story.

That was soooo WAFFy. I loved it. You portrayed them each beautifully. Although, I think you should put more detail , and make it longer.

Aaaw! AAAW! This is so good, so sweet, so moving. Very very well-written. I can't believe Cassie would get married to someone else, though. And that Ax hoof thing... That was really cute.

Aaaw! AAAW! This is so good, so sweet, so moving. Very very well-written. I can't believe Cassie would get married to someone else, though. And that Ax hoof thing... That was really cute.

That was very good and touching.

That was great. My favorite scenes, or parts, whatever you want to call them, were when Rachel and Jake took their picture and when Jake and Tobias sang Happy Birthday to Rachel. They were great scenes. Ah, and I see some subtle J/T. That's interesting. Though it was also nice to see Jake and Cassie make up...well, I guess that describes it. All in all, this was a great little story and I liked it a lot...did I mention Ax buying Rachel a gift was really cute? And the Xena outfit...**snigger**

Random comment: Isn't the image of a little Jake, Rachel, and Cassie adorable? But what happened to Melissa? She dissappeared...