| Reviews for Delusions |
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Abbzcadabbz22 1/28/13 . chapter 27Wow! What a amazing story full of twist and turns! Great job! |
Guest 1/12/13 . chapter 34 Amazing story, perfect last chapter! Really enjoyed reading it. :) Sadly everything has the end :( But still, thanks for one of the best stories I have read. I would love to see a sequel, you're great writer! :) |
Guest 1/12/13 . chapter 34 So cute and fluffy. IM DROWNING IN MALTARA :) Perfect end to a perfect story. And YES to a sequel! |
HopelessRomantic1994 1/13/13 . chapter 34Loved this ending, very clever twist I wasn't expecting that at all! This story was really something and I loved every second of it! Your very talented and I'm looking forward to reading more from you! (And thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed Trying but Failing haha I'll try to update Mal Fallon PI soon, I'm currently in the process of working out the chapters! :D ) -Jade :) |
Guest 1/11/13 . chapter 33 DROWNING IN MALTARA. It was perfect, but from you I would expect nothing less :) |
bugreid 1/12/13 . chapter 34*blink blink* what the poo?! That was so flippin ADORABLE! Dear God, you had me so confused and scared! When I saw Oscar and Sandra on the beginning I was like freaking out and then the whole altar thing. Good gracious, I need a minute to calm my beating heart. I dont know what to think about this! I actually thought they were getting kidnapped! But, it was all amazing in the end because it was too. Darn. Cute! Seriously, cutest thing I've ever read. How sweet! And how could I not review for such an awesome story as this one even though I'm like.. 30 chapters late? Lol. Better late than never. :] Yes you should do a sequel! Ahh I can't wait! |
MALTARA2010 1/12/13 . chapter 34Amazing! I was not expecting that! Great story and I love, love, love the ending! Maltara 4ever :) ... Looking forward to your next story! :) April |
mozzi-girl 1/12/13 . chapter 34Okay that was the most adorable thing, I cannot stop squealing :D Mal's cuteness was way too much! :') - Molly |
bugreid 1/11/13 . chapter 33Oh Dear Heavens.. That ending caught me off guard! I had no idea that that was going to happen! 0 _ 0 it was all cute and fluffy and sweet and then BAM! Kidnapped! :0 looooovely. And heck! Keep going! Ill hold on as long as I possibly can for this story, I love it so much. :] |
HopelessRomantic1994 1/11/13 . chapter 33CLIFFHANGER! Dun dun dunnnnnn! Hehe Such an adorable chapter, so much Maltara fluff and then BAM the unexpected happens! I love this story! its come such a long way and you deserve every review you've gotten, your very talented! I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next! :D Update soon! -Jade :) |
mozzi-girl 1/11/13 . chapter 33No wayyy! I didn't see that coming at all! :O amazing chapter by the way, I loved it! :) Well I can't really TEACH you to be like Mal I don't think haha, or I would... Um... Just play what you write through your head as if you're the character and it kind of just comes to you... For me anyway! - Molly |
MALTARA2010 1/11/13 . chapter 33Ooo a twist! Love it ...:) can't wait to see what happens next! You've come a long way with this story ... Great job! Update soon. I'm glad that u enjoyed now or never ... :) thank you for the boost of confidence ... I be sure to have it done by next week ... :) April |
AKgal2001 1/10/13 . chapter 33Sorry for not reviewing last chapter, I suck at that. Awww come on! It was all cute and sweet and so much Maltara and then Mal gets kidnapped?! What kinda world do we live in. AMAZING chapter, and awesome twist! Update soon! -Malia |
bugreid 1/9/13 . chapter 32Well.. I managed to survive through another chapter..but just barely. The proposal was just TOO. DARN. CUTE! And the dinner with Mal, Ken, and Natara's parents was adorable! I love how the ring matches the male's eyes. Ughhh this was too good! :] |
MALTARA2010 1/9/13 . chapter 32Awe ... I luv Raj and Anita! Mal and Nat are finally engaged! Great chapter! And Yes ... I'm working on another story and hope to have it up soon! :) April |