*squee* Yay! This was an absolutely fantastic story!

*throws confetti in the air* YAY! SHE'S AWAKE! HAPPY DAYS! TwT

FINALLY Olivia is dead!
When I first started reading the chapter I was so confused as to what was going on. I actually had to read it twice. lol. I hope she wakes up. :( Niagara falls will leak from eyes if she doesn't.

Is it just me or does it seem like Crowley unintentionally cursed Sophie to die at a YOUNG AGE in every new life she lives in when he made that deal with the demon possessed witch to bring his dead wife back from the dead? *lol* because it seems like she doesn't get to reach OLD AGE before death claims her again. So what is the deal claiming her life every time she reaches the age she was when human Crowley made the deal with the demon witch? Crowley should try looking for her sooner so he has more time with her before her next deathday hits.

AHHHH!LAKJDSFKLJSDFLKASDFLKJASDKHA SFKJDSKJHK!?
Five dollar happy ending?! I've been thinking of this story as a harsh version of Cinderella. OR! Sleeping beauty! And Olivia will turn into a dragon and Crowley will stab the crap out of her and kill her and everything! D8 Sophie better become like some crazy angel/demon thing so they can be together FOREVER. :(

Great chapter, keep up the good work! :D

Uh oh! Please update soon!

Wait... What?! No! Wtf is going on!? That was so evil of you. Well she's obviously physically ok now... but... Crowley is being a perv now. lol. I would have never guessed that Olivia was her mom, and that is one messed up way of teaching her a lesson. lol. Now I'm suddenly thinking of a demented version of Cinderella. Ha.

Wow. It just got down right crazy!
I'm loving it! xD

Wow... that was... AMAZING! I can't wait to see where it goes next... This is me telling you to not leave it on a cliffhanger and say its finished. Please

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She has to wake up! T-T
Stupid Olivia! D8
Hope you update soon!

I've been reading this story since you've published it. The plot is totally interesting and intriguing)) I can't wait for more, hope you update soon ;)

Another good chapter. I, again, enjoy the different chemistry the characters have, and I'm interested to see how Olivia's plan will turn out.

I repot your fic is wonderful
all these speshul snowflakes
i congrat u on mine and agent fuck asses behalf
continue ur writting agent big crowley dick

This...I like it..MORE!

Shneider-Man sent me here. I've never seen Supernatural so I'm not familiar with the characters and the setting, but in spite of that I gotta say that I like this chapter, I actually feel sorry for Crowley and his personal drama is pretty moving. I think you have potential as a writer, maybe if you keep working on your writing you can become a very good one, I think I saw a few mistakes and maybe some descriptions could be deeper than they are, but this is still nice for a first fic (definitely better than anything I've written).