Great Plot - I like the idea of different points of view ;) I'm doing the same :D

hello, just so you know, i love you'r story and in the end i was crying all the time. haha 'the terrible two' nice ide!

thank you for such a godo story, i enjoyed reading it a great deal

i love how you draw a reader in and make them sit on the edge of thier sets

it was a great story

I loved the ending. I'm glad you put Virgils song in the ending. Also the whole comforting from Virgil and moment between him and Alan. It was nice to get some Virgil and Alan bonding, since there wasn't a lot through out the story. But that's ok, it was perfect and kept me at the edge of my seat the whole time. The part where Alan told the family all the memories he had seen was hilarious exspecially Johns reaction, and the others reaction too. So excited and glad your doing a sequel. Also super excited for your new story you were talking about too. Hope it has plenty of young Alan and Alan whump. Update it soon please, and Merry Christmas. That was a super awesome Christmas present. :D :D

Aww don't make this the end it's really good! Maybe a sequel!

brilliant

Awesome!:)

Loved this story!

Happy Christmas, I'm looking forward to your new story and the sequal after that.

interesting. a very good chapter. thank you. i look forwards to reading more

I loved it. I can't wait for the next chapter. Though I am sad that its ending, I'm also super excited to see the final chaptger. Do you think you could do ha squel showing more of a young Alan growing up in the protectiveness of his older brothers. Your a really good writer, exspecially in capturing the young Alan with his older brothers. It's ok if you don't, just thought I would ask. I Love how Alan said keep the bad guy away from Scott and John. Gordons surprise face and answer was hilarious. Dieing to see the final chapter. Update it super soon please! :D

great chapter

Awesome!:)