Oh, this sounds really interesting. Would love to read more about this.
I adore your style of writing and I think you managed to capture the essence of Akane's character.
I thought the little boy at first is Kogami but after some pondering I think it's Makishima. He's a bit more approachable and fun to talk to more than Kogami who's pretty curt I think. And he also questions himself and the world and has, somehow, a distorted sense of 'normal' or 'right'.
I can't wait until you update.

Interesting story. I like how you portrayed Makishima (I'm guessing it's him) sounding like a mature person and all with his psychology stuff. Your OC is quite interesting too I wonder how their relationship will be in the future. Allies? Enemies? Hmmm... I am definitely curious now.

Seriously love how little Makishima is like; being curious and psychological along with your OC, the flow of the story is quite good too. Keep it up.

Ooh, very good. Continue, pretty please?

Ahh, this is awesome! I see you posted it in November and hasn't updated ever since. Please continue T_T

OMG! this is great! :D At first I didn't know who was the boy she met, but after reading it fully, now I know hahahahahaha it was Makishima right?
I like it, really really like it! :3 please continue

xD Like it so far! Update soon!

Who is it O.o OMG I wanna find out what happens next. Nice writing, great opening, I really like how it's going so far! Please update soon, or the suspense might just make my pscyho pass go up XD

This seems like quite the interesting story; is this chapter (prologue?) describing potentially some interaction between child-Tsunemori and child-Kougami in an once-upon-a-time-maybe? situation? Either way, it's original and I like it, how it flows and develops.

I look forward to the next chapter, when you put it out. :)

o.o what just happened here?