|Reviews for Treacherous|
| lovelylittleflowerchild 12/11/12 . chapter 2
I read both chapters, but I'm doing a review for both. You have a really nice plot idea-I love things dealing with dreams, cosmic stuff, and such. However, I think things are a bit rushed. Maybe you could add Tony's perspective of the dream? Just some food for thought. There are also some teeny tiny typos here and there. Hope that helps a little and I would love to see you continue with this! Peace n' love to ya.