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   Meisa-tan 4/11/13 . chapter 18Hello author! Just dropped by to say I think the plot was very nice, I loved the OC and I loved how paired her with Elrond. As you already know, there were a few misused words here and there which made me smile a bit, so I'm glad you're going to take the time to proofread it again. :) My only other comment would be that sometimes your sentences are too long, or sonetimes yu forget to put commas so it's easy to get lost reading it. Overall I enjoyed reading the fic, and my favorite parts were the ones with cat!Lyra being petted by Elrond. XD So cute! |
| B 4/3/13 . chapter 18 I love Lyra, i would like it even more if u ever write another story about her. |
| dragonsire13 3/6/13 . chapter 18 thanks to everyone for reading this story :) I'm sorry to tell you that it will take at least two months before I have time to write some more. I'm just so caught up in work at the moment, even though I have lots of ideas for my other stories and even new ones... just hope there will be time soon to write again. Again: If there is anyone out there who wants to beta this story I would be delighted :) wish you all the best until soon (I hope) |
| Minxflow 3/4/13 . chapter 18 hi :) just want to know if you could write some more? plz |
| Guest 2/3/13 . chapter 19 Not a bad story and for it I give you: Five Bronze Stars. Hope to see more one day soon. The Crimson Mage. |
| tpx1 1/26/13 . chapter 18 epic story! I enjoyed reading it and was sad to get to the end. Thank you for sharing. |
| 09sasha 1/16/13 . chapter 18 Thank u for an amazing story I loved it. Please continue to write more. |
| 233FreeFall 12/25/12 . chapter 18 love it, thanks for a great story |
| Seven 12/21/12 . chapter 1 This is the best writing I've read in a while. Keep up the good writing. |
| Minxflow 12/21/12 . chapter 17 Love it! Just can't decide what is more crazy: to have another "Lyra" thing/being or that she actually wrote a letter to the Valar (lol) |
| 233FreeFall 12/21/12 . chapter 16 congrats on creating a really dark and scaring place, I was able to actually see all the creepy stuff lying arround. The boggart worked fine too. |
| 233FreeFall 12/21/12 . chapter 15 Hi again sorry was to busy to read it earlier but I just love it. There were so many great scenes! I loved how Elrond talked to his son... |
| Through the Mirror Darkly 12/20/12 . chapter 17 AWESOME UPDATE! LOVE IT! |
| Through the Mirror Darkly 12/20/12 . chapter 16 I love the support that Elrond showed for Lyra in this chapter. It was really nice, and I love everything about the updates! Keep up the awesome work! |
| ThroughtheMirror 12/20/12 . chapter 15 Well, that certainly was a twist. Didn't expect that, but I liked it. :D |
