Good story kotacoeek. I liek Anne coming from the netherworld to visit him and this chapter was very emotive good one

excellent chapter update and i can not wait to read more soon please and thank you

Really good! Thanks for the update. :)

That was awesome! :)
I hope things get better for you soon, and you still managed to ahve a Merry Christmas.

This was fascinating. its interesting how you had Anne coming to Jane to heaven.

I also like how Anne told henry that they would had sons if he had only been patient.

I wonder who 'both of them' are. Mary & Elizabeth? They are the only daughters Henry has. And they were scarred by Henry's actions, which showed in their reigns.

Good work again! Thanks for these frequent updates :)

That's telling him! Good for her!

Nice work! This is really good, and I especially loved the second last paragraph and Henry's feelings about Anne.

loving the story you are writing, hope you can update again soon.

I'm really enjoying this. My only advice is try to make your chapters a bit longer.

i'll be your beta reader if you like, my grammar isn't always perfect, but i did get a C in english grammar at school. (Admittedly that was in 2002 lol)

my email address is saiyanloveruk

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This is great work! You write really good scenes between Henry/Anne.

I love stories where Anne haunts Henry. She deserves to be able to unnerve him at least, after all he did to her... Please update soon!

Hmm. In the show, Anne seemed to have a great caring for her cousin and fellow queen. I wonder if that would spill over into this story. I'd love to see Anne throw the letter that would have sealed Kitty's fate into the fire to protect her, thus saving her life, like she did in this chapter.