Wow! Very impressive!!

my god.

that game was SO BAD, i can't believe ANYONE would write fanfiction about it. then again, there's a community of Megaman authors, so I suppose anything's possible.it's a good story despite the subject matter, Keep it up!

Beautifully executed prose. Kudos for not leaning too heavily on the source material. It did come across as a bit corny...but I suspect that was entirely an intentional effect given your writing skill.

I do have one complaint though...it's entirely too short...

A nice little tail.. er, tale. Having not gotten that far in the game I can't tell if you're staying close to cannon but Tai'Fu acts as I would've expected him to so bonus points for keeping true to the character. It's a nice genlte segment as well - almost as part of a bigger story (hinty hinty). A nice addition to the Tai'Fu fancfiction out there!