Awww ... my heart broke into all these little pieces, it was so /pretty/! I love the way it is divided up so many times, how it all flws, and how it just all feels so /right/. *Favourite* Well done, Paula dear!

Heartbreakingly beautiful.

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*breathes*

TFiOS feels. Oh. My. God. TFIOS FEELS. And Somewhere, Paula! Somewhere with a capital S, and... ohmygod.

[But you never tell anyone about your dream because you were told once that telling a wish stops it from coming true.] This line. This line made me want to cry, because it's so /childish/, so painfully, heartbreakingly /innocent/, and mini Augustus was so hopeful and happy, and... *sobs*

[Don't worry; it's just limb or two.] KILL ME. Just reading that line again made me tear up a little bit. The sarcasm is what made it so /real/, and it just captured how the kid feels in relation to the doctor.

[the unnaturalness of a familiar name on a stranger's tongue] I loved that line. It was... EEP. Really poetic.

I loved the ending, too. That was gorgeous. I'd add more, but I have to leave now...

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooo

No

No

Nuh-uh

Nope

Not at all

No.

P.S. I love your pen name! :D

Wow, that was really amazing to read! This is a very real portrayal of Gus and his inner thoughts, I love it. You write beautifully.

I'm weeping. Beautiful work.

This was amazing and heartbreaking

WHO SAID YOU COULD WRITE TFIOS

I am sobbing. Augustus is so perfect and you've kept him as bloody perfect as he really is, even in death, and NO NO NO PLEASE DON'T USE SECOND PERSON IT KILLS ME YOU KNOW THAT ALREADY.

Are you in anyway related to John Green? BECAUSE I WOULN'T BE BLOODY SURPRISED. Your metaphors and repetition and simple yet killer little sentences that you make out to be casual but really you're laughing as we die. And the braaaackets. The BRACKETS. THE BRACKETS ARE ALWAYS DEADLY. I SHOULD JUST STOP READING AT THE LAST PROPER LINE AND NOT CONTINUE TO READ BETWEEN BRACKETS BUT IT'S ALWAYS SO PERFECT AND OH

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Oh... Wow... I loved it! It was so beautiful! Thanks so much for writing this! :)

-Sunsets