i almost cried at the end. you are the most amazing writer i have seen yet! keep it up Lirin! awesome story! cant wait for the sequel!

OMG! It's over!? It can't be over! *cries hysterically, knees up to chest, rocking back and forth in the farthest corner from my door of my room*

But, even so. Amazing story, and I already can't wait for the sequel! But for now, I'll be reading 'Deleted Tales' to keep my mind preoccupied for the time being! It's not like I won't be buying Beyblades or anything like that and record mine and my kid bro's beybattles. Oh wait, that's exactly what I'll be doing over the summer! :) Yeah, I got him back into beyblade on my 21st b-day yesterday. -insert evil laugh here-

PARTY! *claps hands and reveals the party* And there'll be fireworks later! :D *puts party hats on everyone*

I laughed so hard at Johnny's "attempt" to cook! Sorry, but it was hilarious. That's pretty bad when burnt toast can set off a fire alarm. LOL!

This has been an EPIC story to read! I'm SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO EXCITED for the sequel!

Part two is done...LOL! Poor Kisa, forced to wear dresses and high heels. *sneaks over with a package of t-shirts and jeans* Just don't let Johnny see them. ;)

The ending party's almost finished! All we need is the place for the big fire-I mean a nice view in front of a big fireplace. *Smiles then runs off to get the presents for everyone and put them on the table*

Yay! Another chappie! *hops for joy*

Also, I wish I was bored. But, sadly, that's not the case. I have too much HW to worry about this month alone. But thanks for updating! It really made my day! :)

Another amazing chappie, although a tad bit bittersweet there. But I guess it has to be... Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

So wait...she's just leaving them? Then what's the sequel gonna be on? Now I'm even more excited for it than I was before (If that was even possible...XD).

So much to do and not a lot of time to do it... *starts mumbling about gift baskets and gingerbread cookies* I'll be working overtime to get everything ready! Until then, I'll leave you in suspense about the surprise par- I mean, thing.

YAY! About time Boris got the straight-jacket! *tosses confetti into the air and grabs a tray of brownies, passing them around* Let the celebration BEGIN!

Only three more chapters? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOO! :( I'm gonna miss this one, but I'll still be looking out for the sequel and having fun with ADT. *evil laugh* you all can't loose me just yet.

Yay! Johnny and Kisa have finally met - FINALLY! It's. About. Dang. Time. I thought was gonna go mad if they weren't going to meet soon! Seriously.

And yay for Tom surviving!

Thanks for the double update! It was, um..., doublicious! XD

Aw! *tears of joy* Such a sweet reunion! Loved every - and I do mean, EVERY - minute of it!

Deep breath Johnny. I'd say you won't have much of a choice on the fact of being there or not, the others will probably force their way in before you can say a word.

Honestly, I'd like to see a scene about when Johnny starts having the dreams...maybe have a chapter where he has the very first dream about Kisa, because when you first go to his view point, he's already had it a few times. Maybe fill in that gap a bit and go a bit farther forward to where you started the chapter with his dream in this story. Just a thought.

*fangirl scream* KAI SAID MY NAME! KAI - HE SAID MY NAME! *faints in pure happiness and joy*

I don't really know what to say about what Johnny should do, but I'm just really looking forward to seeing Kai's and Tala's reunion. :)

I won't yell...yet. Poor Tala got the short end of the stick on that one. Now he's a hostage?! I'll be down here...*waves hand, looking up from the ground, holding band aids*...and help keep Kisa safe!

Another great chapter! And I can honestly say that I don't care that it was short! It was still worth the wait, and read! :)

This story is really exciting now! I wish you could upload faster so I could continue reading :)

Poor Ian and the others :( at least some of the kids were able to escape, I hope that the demolition boys will get their revenge on Boris ! He makes me so angry!

My Easter holiday has just begun so happy Easter to you too :)