|Reviews for A Rose Has Bloomed|
| Pokemanchas 12/14/12 . chapter 2
O-kay got a few things wrong here. And before you ask, yes I am that strange kid from gym class.
1. Use " " when using dialouge, instead of ' '
2. When changing point of view, do not go back in time unless the characters are far apart. Otherwise it gets tedious to read through the same dialouge again.
3. There were a few instances of using the wrong word (to, too) so watch out for that.
| Laurie 11/27/12 . chapter 1