Amazing story:)
I wish this was what really happened in the movie, because I absoloutley love the idea!
Please update as soon as possible

pleaes huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrr rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyy yyyyyy.
I expect one by jan.2

I am enjoying this. I'll try to be patient, but please don't forget this story. Thank you! :)

I absolutely love this story! At first I wasn't completely sure where you were going with this story, but this chapter was absolutely amazing and I can't wait for the next update! And I love how you relayed Edmund's thoughts about the White Witch...very real and I could really feel how all of this is for him. Keep up the excellent work! D

I loved it :D I can't wait untill January :)

So happy you updated! Great chapter and I look forward to January :)

omg sooooo good! i really look forward to where this story goes. can't wait for more!

Ooh this is awesome! Such a different take on this scene and I like it. Please continue it I'm enjoying this immensely.

i loved it :D i cant wait for more :)

i like it update soon

I think you've captured Tilda Swinton's Jadis very well! All of her dialogue sounded perfect. I'm curious to see where this is going. My only suggestion - it was weird to have Edmund call the White Witch "Jadis." It sounded too...conversational. Which I guess you could play up since she and Edmund have a "history," like she reminds him, and are thus familiar with each other. But it took some of the threat out of Edmund's words - more of a warning to an equal, in a way, than a threat to somebody who's against Aslan and thus is sort of less than Edmund, who has Aslan on his side. Does that make any sense?

Ooooh, I'm really intrigued by this. Dying to know what happens next. Please update soon.

Thank you for not making this slash. :)

3 Edmund! Pretty interesting! I can't wait to see how the story will be! Hope you update soon!