|Reviews for Then There Were Two|
| Guest 1/12/13 . chapter 2
I wish this was what really happened in the movie, because I absoloutley love the idea!
Please update as soon as possible
| Guest 12/17/12 . chapter 2
pleaes huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrr rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyy yyyyyy.
I expect one by jan.2
| WillowDryad 12/9/12 . chapter 2
I am enjoying this. I'll try to be patient, but please don't forget this story. Thank you! :)
| sidrocks87 12/9/12 . chapter 2
I absolutely love this story! At first I wasn't completely sure where you were going with this story, but this chapter was absolutely amazing and I can't wait for the next update! And I love how you relayed Edmund's thoughts about the White Witch...very real and I could really feel how all of this is for him. Keep up the excellent work! D
| anniecarrots1 12/9/12 . chapter 2
I loved it :D I can't wait untill January :)
| Lady Loralye 12/9/12 . chapter 2
So happy you updated! Great chapter and I look forward to January :)
| Lady Loralye 12/1/12 . chapter 1
omg sooooo good! i really look forward to where this story goes. can't wait for more!
| Tif S 11/28/12 . chapter 1
Ooh this is awesome! Such a different take on this scene and I like it. Please continue it I'm enjoying this immensely.
| anniecarrots1 11/28/12 . chapter 1
i loved it :D i cant wait for more :)
| Guest 11/28/12 . chapter 1
i like it update soon
| rainpaint 11/28/12 . chapter 1
I think you've captured Tilda Swinton's Jadis very well! All of her dialogue sounded perfect. I'm curious to see where this is going. My only suggestion - it was weird to have Edmund call the White Witch "Jadis." It sounded too...conversational. Which I guess you could play up since she and Edmund have a "history," like she reminds him, and are thus familiar with each other. But it took some of the threat out of Edmund's words - more of a warning to an equal, in a way, than a threat to somebody who's against Aslan and thus is sort of less than Edmund, who has Aslan on his side. Does that make any sense?
| WillowDryad 11/27/12 . chapter 1
Ooooh, I'm really intrigued by this. Dying to know what happens next. Please update soon.
Thank you for not making this slash. :)
| CM 11/27/12 . chapter 1
3 Edmund! Pretty interesting! I can't wait to see how the story will be! Hope you update soon!