Please update!

thou I kinda looked forward to the showdown between kuyou and andrew, disappointed there won't be, but this turned out awesome either way! _

MMMMMMMOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAARRRRR RRR

Great story. Mizore is ic, which is hard to do. My only complaint is that it is only 22k words.

As we say on fimfiction... (Deep inhale)

MMMMMMOOOOOOOAAAAAAARRRRRRR

Love it.

Damn, and here I though Andrew wasn't going to get another injury, HE'S AN INJURY MAGNET!

Well looks like he showed them to never underestimate and take on a helljumper, good chapter good ending there

"And to answer you bitches question the Elite is going to make an appearance this chapter"? Lol, what? Took me a few re-reading to understand!

Anyway, jokes aside, you're doing an excellent work so far! At long last an update, but hey, if that's the time you need to publish such a captivating story, I'm glad to wait! Update soon!

Signing out

Andrew was faster. He drew his combat knife that he was holding and plunged it into the Elite's neck. '

Halo wars momunt. also, a little constructive critisism. if some one is thinking, the text is generay different then normal speech. most people generay use the slanted letters for thoughts or names of ships, etc

Just wondering, why is Andrew protecting Mizora, as far as I know he owes her nothing, so why is he fighting to protect her?

I like it. Though Im curious. When is the elite going to come into play?

i am waiting for the next chap. you made an awsome story!

awsome chapter!

(If you're having trouble picturing what is going on with Moka, just imagine when Crona shows his 'poetry' to Maka from soul eater
instintly made me love this chapter.

very good chapter