|Reviews for A New Storm|
| Lisha 5/13/13 . chapter 6
| brian 4/3/13 . chapter 6
thou I kinda looked forward to the showdown between kuyou and andrew, disappointed there won't be, but this turned out awesome either way! _
| Derp 3/25/13 . chapter 6
| Random Guy 3/17/13 . chapter 6
Great story. Mizore is ic, which is hard to do. My only complaint is that it is only 22k words.
As we say on fimfiction... (Deep inhale)
| SpartanDragon300 2/27/13 . chapter 6
| KO 2/25/13 . chapter 6
Damn, and here I though Andrew wasn't going to get another injury, HE'S AN INJURY MAGNET!
| Major Simi 2/25/13 . chapter 6
Well looks like he showed them to never underestimate and take on a helljumper, good chapter good ending there
| allfictions 2/25/13 . chapter 6
"And to answer you bitches question the Elite is going to make an appearance this chapter"? Lol, what? Took me a few re-reading to understand!
Anyway, jokes aside, you're doing an excellent work so far! At long last an update, but hey, if that's the time you need to publish such a captivating story, I'm glad to wait! Update soon!
| HKH4 is White Fox 2/25/13 . chapter 6
Andrew was faster. He drew his combat knife that he was holding and plunged it into the Elite's neck. '
Halo wars momunt. also, a little constructive critisism. if some one is thinking, the text is generay different then normal speech. most people generay use the slanted letters for thoughts or names of ships, etc
| Draco Olim 2/19/13 . chapter 5
Just wondering, why is Andrew protecting Mizora, as far as I know he owes her nothing, so why is he fighting to protect her?
| Sharps19 2/14/13 . chapter 5
I like it. Though Im curious. When is the elite going to come into play?
| HKH4 is White Fox 2/11/13 . chapter 5
i am waiting for the next chap. you made an awsome story!
| HKH4 is White Fox 2/11/13 . chapter 4
| HKH4 is White Fox 2/11/13 . chapter 3
(If you're having trouble picturing what is going on with Moka, just imagine when Crona shows his 'poetry' to Maka from soul eater
instintly made me love this chapter.
| HKH4 is White Fox 2/11/13 . chapter 2
very good chapter