Oh...im crying so hard right now. Excellent job with this...gah i look like a mess... the song i was listening to was Order Made (the shizaya video) and the moment steve really realized what he had done...the song got kinda quiet and slowed down at that moment...oh man this is just...good job.

Oh, so sad but a happy ending.

LOVED IT! and I feel bad for Steve and Darren poor things :(

Well thank you for making me cry, it's been a while since I've read something that made me feel things and a piece that is close to the actual Steve I pictured. The last line broke me completely. I really really liked this fic :)

This is such a good fic, I nearly cried at it. I love how you made Steve realise that Darren was helping him in the end, I wish that did happen in the book. Keep writing :)!