love love love this story! cant wait for more!

Thanks for the shout out, and I love how included basil and the flash back, it's interesting to piece together what happened, everyday I come onto fanfic hoping u updated its pretty funny and I think it would be pretty cool with horse back riding idea like maybe she gets an injury while she's horse back riding and it somewhat relates to what happened when she was a kid, r my favorite writer of all time. Because you take ur time like when I write I move from the topic to quickly

Thanks for the shout out, and I love how included basil and the flash back, it's interesting to piece together what happened, everyday I come onto fanfic hoping u updated its pretty funny and I think it would be pretty cool with horse back riding idea like maybe she gets an injury while she's horse back riding and it somewhat relates to what happened when she was a kid

Ya know what do what u want to do it is a great story no matter what and I disagree with the comment below mine, what u should do is have her and basil moments more and hurry up with the writing please, I can't wait to read more

I think you should definitely do the whole eating disorder/self harm story line. I think emily is a bit too "fantastic" at everything and i think keeping the horse riding part out of the story would be best. I feel that there are too many activities going on in her life which kind of takes away from the main plot line of the story and that there is more time being spent talking about and introducing the activities rather than other things that could be going on in her life. This story has amazing potential though.. Sorry for the REALLY long rant. I hope this was helpful! :)

I would focus on her insecurities, and then focus on her dancing and then you could add hippotherapy-which is riding.

I believe at times it can come accross as a little much but personally I believe you also give her a lot of weaknesses. As for the horse back riding not sure
But I do love her

yikes poor Emily she is now scared and confused

I want to give her a hug and a swift kick to the boys they may be worried and I don't blame them but they may have made things even worse

Can you update this soon? Please? Thank you :)

This was really good! I hope everything's going to turn out well for her! I really am enjoying this! Thanks for the Mention!

Awesome job with this I love that shay knows Ms. Abby interesting.
I can't wait to read more

I didn't think the chapter was to short. I thought this chapter went very well and I can't wait to read more!

I really liked it, and also the fact that you touched on some of her insecurities as well.

I really liked this, Thanks for the mention!

can't wait to read more you are doing great