This story is so refreshing an funny, but at the same time very romantic. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Carmen an Ash do get together.

Losing me. I don't get it. Turning Carmen into Ash's mother. Ash avoiding her responsibility as a cop and not confronting Carmen about the charges against her.

So,this sweet little blond is not that sweet,right? ;-) keep writing, can't wait for next chapter

Is Dodger the Sheriff or a Deputy?

Bulldyke or stud are compliments or insults depending on who is saying them and in what context they are being used. This usage to me is insulting. The characters do not know each other and the blond is an obvious elitist. When I read the internal dialogue I immediately disliked the blond.

Loving this story! Things are getting good...

can not wait for Carman to come clean about her past and want to know so badly what hank said to Ash. I hope you have the next chapter soon and sorry about your wifi

Sorry Ive been too slow with this. Good start got me interested and looking forward to the next though I wouldnt know if the words were true or not seeing as Im not from around those parts

Hey,still great story ;-) I can't wait what will happen ;-)

hope you write more this fanfic is freaking awesome

Loved this chapter, fell out of my set waiting on it (LOL) I love the picture you painted using lady and speedy ;)

Haha,really good chapter! ;-) like it a lot!

:-)

You have me on the edge of my set, can not wait for the next chapter, and thank you for the story

Hey, I am glad you updated so fast! ;-) So,they are not ''take it slowly'', lol! This chapter was short but I enjoyed it. Hope the next will be longer and really really good! Btw every chapter in this story is perfect :-) Thank you!