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Congrats, you made me cry. Not many fics can make me do that. The musical terms were a very nice touch, especially since the world of TotA is so music-oriented.

Wow! This is beautifully written. Awesome for everyone grieving over Ion.

Very nice. The musical terms were used well, and I especially loved the part about forgiveness.

I was THIS close to tears. That's marvelous, considering the only time I cry when looking at fiction is when I watch it on a screen.

You're trying to make my cry, aren't you? ;-;

I love this. It is beautifully written and I love the emotion and everything. I think it's absolutely wonderful.

Good use of emotion! It was nice to get inside of Florian's head for once. Very realistic take on how his death scene played out through his eyes. But I did notice some pitfalls: You use language that most readers aren't familiar with, i.e musical terms. They could throw people off. The summary should be rewritten for starters. And the ending was anti-climatic. It's choppy and doesn't flow like the rest of the story. You may have added it for effect, but ti didn't work for me.

Good luck! u