|Reviews for Adagio|
| Lil'MissEya 1/1/13 . chapter 1
That was so... asdfghjkl;;
| crazyemeralddragons 12/28/12 . chapter 1
Congrats, you made me cry. Not many fics can make me do that. The musical terms were a very nice touch, especially since the world of TotA is so music-oriented.
| Holly3500 12/23/12 . chapter 1
Wow! This is beautifully written. Awesome for everyone grieving over Ion.
| Penguin Pop 12/8/12 . chapter 1
Very nice. The musical terms were used well, and I especially loved the part about forgiveness.
| selenia-sopheria 12/4/12 . chapter 1
I was THIS close to tears. That's marvelous, considering the only time I cry when looking at fiction is when I watch it on a screen.
| OmegaStarShooter14 12/2/12 . chapter 1
You're trying to make my cry, aren't you? ;-;
| MewSayuri Hitachiin Mutomancer 11/29/12 . chapter 1
I love this. It is beautifully written and I love the emotion and everything. I think it's absolutely wonderful.
| pinkspeedstar 11/29/12 . chapter 1
Good use of emotion! It was nice to get inside of Florian's head for once. Very realistic take on how his death scene played out through his eyes. But I did notice some pitfalls: You use language that most readers aren't familiar with, i.e musical terms. They could throw people off. The summary should be rewritten for starters. And the ending was anti-climatic. It's choppy and doesn't flow like the rest of the story. You may have added it for effect, but ti didn't work for me.
Good luck! u