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| Reviews for Umbra, the phantom hero |
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   shugokage 4/29/13 . chapter 15Amazing story incredible ending! |
| book phan44 4/24/13 . chapter 15 except desserae, who was in the ground at the time waiting for a chance to give out a wish. ... guess i cant say UPDATE anymore |
| Storm050 4/24/13 . chapter 15 Ending seems a little rushed but other that that I loved the story. |
| goodgirl275 4/24/13 . chapter 15 Aww! That is such a nice, bittersweet ending. I wish there would be a sequel, but that would be hard to write. Good job on this story. I loved it. :-) |
| DARKLOVEFORFANFICTION123 4/24/13 . chapter 15 awwww, the end... wait. THE END! noooooooooooo! if you ever have the time, please make a sequal! |
| Weirdo 4/24/13 . chapter 15 Nice Ending |
| VideoGamingFreak1213 4/24/13 . chapter 15 VGF:Thats it the end, farewell, over, done, through. And it was awesome! :D I loved it, and hope you continue writing. I will end with my goodbyes,Ta. From, VGF |
| jakefan 4/24/13 . chapter 15 that ending felt REALLY anticlimactic. it should have come some time before the last chapter. (at the very least, switch the positions of the slade/vlad fight and that part at the beginning, to give it some more impact) nice story tho. waiting to see if you will come up with anything else. |
| ChristinCC 4/24/13 . chapter 14 Niiiice chapter! Update soon please! -CC |
| Sparxthehdgehog 4/16/13 . chapter 14 Aha! Ghost healing can restore speech. |
| book phan44 4/16/13 . chapter 14 smart robin |
| Monkeygirlz3 4/16/13 . chapter 14 Aw |
| Nightshade1712 4/15/13 . chapter 14 I am guessing Red X and Vlad, any way good job on the chapter, please update soon you have a really good story going. |
| RCRC36 4/15/13 . chapter 14 please make more its sow gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooood |
| Karyn Phantom 4/15/13 . chapter 14 is it Dani with the ghosts of Sam and Tucker? I look forward to the next chapter. |
