I. LOVE. YOU.
I. NEED. UPDATE.
CAN'T. FORM. COHERANT. WORDS. HELP.

asdfghjkl I love this and all of its fangirl glory

when r you going to update again? escape from furnace is one of my fave book series, and I always thought that Donovan and Alex should be together... so far, you are the only person who is writing about them as a pairing, and this may be only your first fan fiction, BUT IT ROCKS!

I think you did a good job, but there's a problem. In the book it mentions Donovan has dark skin and a bright smile. Therefore implying Donovan is black. Unless he's from one small tribe in Africa he wouldn't have blond hair. Other than that... No huge mistakes.

this iz soooooo cool! i flippin luv dis! plz cont.! i will luv u 4eva if u do! im lookin forward to it!

Please continue! This is really good so far, and I'd love to read more. Keep up the good work!

I honestly know you're writing about a novel that doesn't get enough Fanfiction attention, but this is really good! It would be a shame to discontinue the story, I think it would be great if you gave a shot at finishing it, it's worth it after all. (Based on your last update) -But please get to typing up a third chapter.

Keep up the good job- Please''? :))