this have to continue, I wanth to know wath the archangel tell to Harry, an specialy wath the irreverent Harry do after that.

Interesting beginning. Though I'm not sure why Michael would have interfered so directly, everything else about this fic screams awesome! Your dialogue is witty and the action scenes are great! To me, you seem to be a good enough writer to find a plausible way to justify Michael's actions. I look forward to reading more.

So cool! Amazing story, fast action, witty dialog and a great writing style- I love it! "You- you are not pretty! And all I'd wanted was freaking milk." - Hilarious! Pls continue.

Well, that does seem to be about the shape of Harry's days. I'm not sure Michael is supposed to be Uriel's boss, though; I thought they were equals with different briefs - like, Michael's the General of the army while Uriel's the head of the Heavenly CIA (now there's two thoughts that don't normally go together!). When he said "I'm his boss", I was thinking 'did you seriously just put freaking *Jesus* in your fic?! Can. Of. Worms. But, you didn't. Heh. Anyway, a great first chapter, and I'm looking forward to seeing what dire situation has got Michael intervening so directly rather than just sending Sanya or whatever. Something to do with his guardianship of the swords, perhaps? Bring on the next chapter. :)

(PS. This could have all been avoided if he just got Demonreach a cow.)

wow great! I can really hardly wait for this to keep going, I may think I can see where it is going, but who knows where your story is taking me?

Ah-ha! That sounded almost like how Jim would write it. Please continue... I'll give cookies XD

The thing is, that none of the Archangels actually take part of the fighting. If they did, they'd eradicate all of existance. It would be far better if the Denarians either ran their asses off or if Michael appeared to Harry later.

That said, your writing is good and I feel you're pulling off Dresden's narrative voice well.

Archangels answer directly to God, and Michael is the Right Hand of God canonically.