That was awesome!

A (sour) cherry on top conclusion-Loved this last bit

This is delightfully chilling.

Great insight into him

You always write her with so much depth and insight from her perspective-this is perfect-This 'Wendy was too good to be true. A wonderful memory that refused to fade as everything else in her life did. A life outside got further and further away. She had been a reporter once, right? Had that been true? She had been so stupid, so naive to think she could get a story on Briarcliff, on Bloody Face. She had been so sure it was Kit Walker. She had been so sure of alot of things. Now she was sure of nothing. Nothing except Wendy.' Lana being wrapped up so tight and unraveled so fast into this deadly darkness-love how you described that-so excellent-And her going to avenge Wendy and the other women and free Kit-Love this fearless vengeance going to be taken-Can not wait until you get deeper into this soon-Hiciste un magnifico trabajo

Sister Jude against Sr Devil Eunice-epicness in the making-Arden's ass is gonna get got, someway, somehow-Maybe Pepper or an immortal Shelly will come back-Sr Jude friggin had him!-'She had once laughed when she was told that the Apostle Jude was the patron Saint of lost causes because maybe that was what she always was; a lost cause.''They were the closest things to children she would ever have. They were the closest thing to a family she ever really had. That was the sad thing; or maybe it was the thing that made her human. She wasn't sure anymore. It didn't matter anymore.' This is anazing!-Love this perspective of Sr Jude-Like a dip/plunge into her head

Oh my god I love this. I have to admit, I wish the whole story was about Lana because I enjoy the way you write her thoughts, but it's an excellent story idea.

This part: She would hold out for that at least. She could do that much. Wendy would understand. Wendy had always understood.
Broke my heart. She's literally waiting only to avenge Wendy, Kit, and the other women before she dies. It's so tragic.
Wonderful job. I hope you write more about Lana!

Small chapter but I love it. Hope it goes well :)