|Reviews for Drunk At First Sight|
| harrypotter.stieglitz991 5/1/13 . chapter 3
| Death by Violet 4/3/13 . chapter 3
Don't be discoraged from writing this if you. Love it. And I just wanted to say that I really like this story and hope you continue. Will you update soon to stop all the suspense of your little cliffhanger?
| Dylan Belcher 3/23/13 . chapter 3
Why haven't you updated the story yet? Right now this is just one of the many Hijack fanfiction stories I am reading, and its pretty good, but Im just a little tired of waiting. Please update it soon. By the way, I want to be an author, so you could read my books someday.
| rosie chan 3/17/13 . chapter 3
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
| Elfxci 3/6/13 . chapter 3
I love this sooooooo much! PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOONNN! My personal opinion is that you should focus more on hiccups past and intertwine that with pitch or something becuase there's already been alot of regular pitch ones but this story is SPECTACULAR SO FAR! LOVE IT SO MUCHHHHH! :D
| xcv 2/19/13 . chapter 3
i like it.
| Loti-miko 2/16/13 . chapter 3
I've been waiting for this chapter! And it wasn't a disappointment at all!
I really hope you update ASAP! :)
| greyhaze 2/10/13 . chapter 3
| tamatoe 2/10/13 . chapter 2
Oh and happy late birthday! So rude of me not to put it in my first review. .
| tamatoe 2/10/13 . chapter 3
For some reason, I pictured Toothless with some sort of handicap. Like his tail was bitten off, or he has a dead leg, I don't know, but I thought it'd be kind of consistent. I liked the interactions with the kids. It was a nice touch, and showed how Jack was starting to get followers, or whatever. I loved Hiccup's awkwardness. It's like I could hear his voice, since the actor has a unique tone to his. I don't want to call it whiny, but something to that effect.
I know that Jack is still getting over the fact that Hiccup doesn't really /need/ him around and his Hiccup is long gone, but the pity party and the little dispute just really really annoyed me. It wasn't wrong, but Jack just felt like the emotional girl that can't get over the fact her boyfriend has friends or has something outside of their relationship.
There were some sentences that could use some changes to make it flow better, but other than that, great job on the writing!
Just a little personal opinion: I hate hate it when people renew old villains after they've been defeated. It's really annoying for me, and they might even do it in the second movie (if they ever make one), but I just think it's better and more creative to come up with an original conflict. I know this is /fanfiction/ so there's not much originality involved in the first place, but still.
Not that there's anything wrong with it, of course, just a dislike. Good luck with the idea!
| Glutamine 2/4/13 . chapter 3
Can't wait for the next update! Hopefully it's soon !
| Antha 2/4/13 . chapter 3
Ohmygosh! I want the neeext! I love it sooo much! And why do you stopped when Pitch appears you monster?! No really, your fic is amazing, the chapters are a bit too short but i don't mind go on like that (and sorry for my poor english, it's not my native language)
| Aestivates 2/3/13 . chapter 3
Ahh, this is extremely interesting and well-written so far! I'm really enjoying it, and I can't wait to see what happens with Pitch.
| Inapproite-Sales 2/3/13 . chapter 3
This is absolutely lovely. I can't wait for the next chapter.
| aiTaiOrihara 2/3/13 . chapter 3
A-aww Hiccup cares about himmmm he's just all tsundere aww it's sad because past hiccup hshsbsjsjd aww please don't take forever to update again I don't want them to be sad! Also I am hoping that Japanese school uniform is put to good use... Heheh...