i remember reading this on but i never got to read the end i love it.

I loved reading this. I thought that the plot was amazing and I love how you portrayed the characters. This story sucked me in and I believe it to be one of the best Sea Patrol fics I've read. Congratulations on doing such a fabulous job and thank you.

xSuperNovax

Yay! Nice ending wiggle. Well done.

Thanks, I have really enjoyed reading this story. Loved the sumery at the end.

great two more chapters. The pace of the story is starting to quicken, can't wait for more.

Oooh, dramatic ending! Can't wait to see what happens next.

WOW! I love the way this story is moving the super quick uploads are brilliant. Looking forward to the next chapters. Thanks.

hope they stay happy and honest with each other! mikes parents are a bit controlling though - give them some privacy! you have got me intregued as too who the attacker is though thought it kates mum but know you usually got a twist planned!

oww wooow ! i love this story I like ur writing style even though it's a bit OC. can't wait for the next chapters to come :)

OH NO! What a dramatic pause. I hope this conversation will be finished soon.

more pleasre! :D

I'm enjoying reading this story. It contains all the elements, a little bit of drame,sadness,humour plus a touch of mystery. I look forward to how it all comes together in future chapters. Thanks for the regular updates.

Well, but with an improving writing your style must change at least a little bit, it's like cars. version 2ist better than one, and looks a little bit diffrent, not much, but you can see it if you're looking. :D:D

It seems a bit strange that the Feds are talking about Kate sometimes as "Kate" and then "Lieutenant McGregor" (and it each situation was prefferded the last (I'm talking about the start of this chapter and the talk in the hospital room) )

I have a question to your comment on my review in Chapter 6: Do you write this story last year or through last year? Because I'm not sure if I see a change in your style or if I make me overlook the to my dislike formulations ( ahh, this shouldn't sound as bad is it does, so sorry xDDDD)

"Agent Murphy, have you ever lost a child?" - I think this is my favorite line in this chapter...

ahh and ahhhh! Cliffhanger! :D:D So you know, don't need to long for the next chapter... I hope it's okay if I make a suggestion who's at the door: Kates Mother or another realative...?

At first I want to - well not apoligize and defentlyl not to defend myself, but I want to say, because my last comment sounds a little bit rude, that I sometimes get a little bit to emotional by reading a story and then well, you see in my comment what happens, when the ultra-perfectionist in me is saying hello :D:D:D

Indeed, everyone has his own style, but sometimes I like your writing-style, I like in this chapter, because it was so fluffy with both of them awakening in the hospital room...

" 'And that would be a excellent idea,' the doctor says as he enters the room", I think this is my favorite line, because it made me smile.

I hope my further reviews doesn't sound to bad, because I feeling "nice,not-good-ahhh,nice-NOOOO!-like-dislike-like- dislike", when I'm reading you'r story... well, okay, now I'm talking some kind of bullshit, because I feel bad of my review and on the other hand not, and well, I stop writing and read the next chapter xDD