  Branchee 2004-03-23 . chapter 2Hey dude just read the first two chaps, you said mines good? well your story looks about 100 times better, ill see ya at work, peace |
| chibibaka1 2002-10-17 . chapter 29 Great job! I can't wait to read the slug one. Yay! Gogeta's so cool!
As i said before, this was a great story and i really enjoyed reading it! |
| VegetaGokuLover 2002-10-11 . chapter 30 AWESOME, GREAT, WELL-WRITTEN, ACTION PACKED LAST CHAPTER!! It was so good! There's too many good things about this fanfic that I can't explain..it's just too awesome! AND A SEQUEL? OMG! I'M SO EXCITED FOR THAT! The son of slug?! Man..this is so cool! I'll be reading and reviewing that fic as well..nice job on this fic! It's one of the best I've ever read! |
| Queen000 2002-10-11 . chapter 29 lol. if Bujai didn't kill Vegeta, Bulma's hugs will.
lol. anyways, great story, and i'm going to read the next chapter now.
DBZ Fanfiction Queen |
| Wicked Woman 2002-10-11 . chapter 30 Thank YOU for writting this story. Gonna look for the new one now.
Wicked Woman |
| Cueil 2002-10-10 . chapter 29 yeah...Gogeta doesn't ** around! I love that one move he does though... that was cool how you brought it back! |
| Debido 2002-10-10 . chapter 30 A great ending to a great story. Period.
Just can't wait to see the sequal, though I'm just a bit curious about the son of slug. Are you referring to the son of Lord Slug the namek (then again he was asexual, so it kinda screws things up) or is this going to be another completely different character/namek altogether. |
| Cueil 2002-10-09 . chapter 28 in the movie Gogetta seemed pretty damn serious... he didn't say anything hardly and quickly killed his apponent. |
| chibibaka1 2002-10-08 . chapter 28 Yay! Another chapter well done... well of corse! I love how your chapters are so discriptive of the battle scenes. You can picture them clearly. Please write more... pleaase!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| VegetaGokuLover 2002-10-08 . chapter 28 Great chapter! I loved the fighting scenes! It was simply awesome.. I saw every single second of it in my head.. that's amazing! As for the characters, their in perfect character..as always. Man.. Gogeta's arrogance is a big disadvatage.. if Bujai's smart, he'll take advantage on that..man, update soon! I have to know what the outcome is! |
| Queen000 2002-10-07 . chapter 28 excellent chapter as always.
DBZ Fanfiction Queen |
| dbz fanfiction queen 2002-10-06 . chapter 27 great chappy, but the chapters are too short. please make them longer. thx.
what's gonna happen next? will it be easy to defeat Bujai as it looks like it will be, or will Gogeta defuse too soon? please write more!!! |
| dbz fanfiction queen 2002-10-06 . chapter 26 gomen gomen gomen gomen gomen. gomen nasai for being so late in reviewing. i was sleeping over at a friends house. *smiles sheepishly* i'm gonna read the next chappy now. ^_^ |
| chibibaka1 2002-10-06 . chapter 27 Wow!!! WEll what can i say... hmm... that was one of the best, most well written stories i have ever read. Another story for my favorites list! Yay! Please, oh please right more! |
| Wicked Woman 2002-10-06 . chapter 27 You're making the story too short again. But it is good so I'll let it slide. Plz continue.
Wicked Woman |
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