|Reviews for Restart Myself|
| gracegrrl007 4/15/13 . chapter 7
I love these guys so much, and Yuuki is so patient in dealing with them. I could only take so much of this before I just gave up and wailed in a corner.
Although I can't help but wonder, what was Chihya doing in a giant black pot...?
I look forward to the next chapter, but I also look forward to Yuuki's next adventure with the puchidols! Good luck with your writing! :3
| gracegrrl007 4/1/13 . chapter 6
Oh yay, you're back! I'm so excited!
Yuuki and Kuromi have a really cute relationship. I'm really excited for the chapter where she gets to meet the idols. And PUCHIM SU IS NEXT! I LOVE PUCHIM SU! :D
Kuroi, you suck. Leave Yuuki alone. And yet somehow, I'm really excited to see how this turns out :/
Can't wait for more! :3
| Project-Idol 3/26/13 . chapter 6
Hello, it's good to see another chapter from you again. The chapter was small but it gave a nice insight to the Producer's relationship with Yuuki. I also liked the shared moment between the President and Kotori, but you could have elaborated more on Kotori's choice to remain just as an office lady. Remembrer to give insights into their mind, even if the story is in third person. That being said, you should try to keep the point of view constant but if you have to switch out, try not to come out and say "this story is in This Person's point of view". And just another thing: with the scene between Kuroi and hired villain, try using less dialogue and more scenery and atmosphere descriptions. Something like:
Kuroi swiveled away from the view of the Tokyo skyline to see a man hidden in the shadows of his office. He smiled with absolute pleasure, knowing that this was his knight to put 765 Pro in checkmate. "I assume you'll get the job done?" he questioned, mainly in jest.
The man bowed, a malicious grin gracing his features. "765 Pro won't even stand a chance."
I'm sorry. I'm not intending to write your story for you, so please forgive me. But having more descriptions in your story will help your reader feel the scene rather than just hearing it or looking in. Evil is also best spoken in moderation, to enhance the villain's...evilness(?) and keeps the reader in suspense.
Overall, your story is flowing well. Yuuki is still a realistic and great character, Kuromi and Ta-kun are also awesome friends, and all the idols and Producer are in character. I really look forward to your next chapter.
| gracegrrl007 2/13/13 . chapter 5
I MISSED YOU!
Anyways, this chapter was just absolutely adorable. And YUUKIMAKOTO INTERACTIONS! STILL SHIPPING THEM, YUP...
*cough* But yeah. Yuuki is so adorable, just wanting his Nii-chan to give him praise...reminds me a bit of the relationship between Makoto and Azusa in Idolmaster: Xenoglossia. And I love their relationship, which means I love Yuuki and Producer's relationship.
Keep up the good work! Your fans are enjoying it. :3
| Nemuri-hime626 2/2/13 . chapter 4
This was awesome! Do more of this please! XD
I'd like to see a bit of Chihya. :3
| Project Idol 12/25/12 . chapter 4
This is just wonderful! Every chapter has been a delight to read. I hope you do well in National Service, everyone will definitely miss your writing. Hurry back soon!
| gracegrrl007 12/21/12 . chapter 4
I LOVE THOSE GUYS!
I have to say, my favorite part was Makochii using a Heihachi move XDD I hate Heihachi. :3 But it's cute when Makochii does it. Especially when said Makochii is chubbier than usual. :3
I think I may have just died from the sheer cuteness of this omake.
Thanks for the moe overload! X3
| gracegrrl007 12/13/12 . chapter 3
MAJOR SHIPPING FEELS.
All it took was one interaction and I already ship Makoto and Yuuki. Is that weird? Especially considering she's mine *vaporized* Yuuki is probably not interested in a girlfriend.
I officially ship Ta-kun and Kuromi too. Yup. This was a great chapter! I'll be sad while I eagerly await your return to the book. Good job!
| gracegrrl007 12/6/12 . chapter 2
Aw, Yuuki, you're a sweet heart. Helping Azusa like that.
Just like our beloved Azusa-san to get lost. This is such a cute story I still have all my theories but I will continue to keep them to myself. I can't wait for the next chapter!
And I shall be eagerly awaiting your return from hiatus. Nice work!
| PassingDays 12/6/12 . chapter 1
Very interesting! It's nice to see a very fleshed out OC. I am eager to see how he does as a professional idol.
Keep it up!
| gracegrrl007 12/3/12 . chapter 1
Bwaaa, that was so cute! Yuuki seems like such a loveable guy, y'know? I have my own theories about how this will end up but I won't tell you what they are. It's your story after all. X3 I'll just wait and see how things go.
| Project Idol 12/1/12 . chapter 1
This is a really good story, I'm impressed. Usually OC characters are depressing heroes with tragic backstories and a target for romance, but I'm glad you didn't do that. Yuuki seems like a realistic character and I find myself respecting and liking him.
And thank you for giving the Producer an important role in the story! Most people tend to forget that he is an important too. There were no blatant spelling errors as far I can see. This is a very promising story. Please keep up the good work, I look forward to your next chapter.