|Reviews for Dancing In The Dark|
| Ginabella59 5/18/13 . chapter 14
Good chapter as always
| Ginabella59 5/17/13 . chapter 13
I have to wait until tomorrow for the next chapter
| rubiesymusica 5/17/13 . chapter 17
Oh Jax, you sure do know how to make this weak, cardiac-problem riddled heart ache even more, don't ya? I love your fics and the rollercoaster of emotions I go through when you update.
| Ginabella59 5/17/13 . chapter 12
Another good chapter
| Ginabella59 5/17/13 . chapter 11
Good chapter again
| Ginabella59 5/17/13 . chapter 10
| rpattzlover24096 5/17/13 . chapter 17
Didn't get an email for this chapter update it's good that I saw!
I like Marcus he's so protective of Bella :) hope E&B realize their love for each other when they're apart.. Great chapter can't wait for more!
| janshanr 5/17/13 . chapter 17
| FrenchSoRandom 5/17/13 . chapter 17
Daamn for not notifiing me of the new chapter !
anyways ... Marcus is a prick ! i get that he just got dumped and all that but still he didn't have to go and berate Edward !
And the dry humping was really good ! i need more of that in my life :D
| Ginabella59 5/16/13 . chapter 9
Good chapter again...until tomorrow
| Ginabella59 5/16/13 . chapter 8
| BronxBomber87 5/16/13 . chapter 17
Gah stupid FF didn't let me know you updated! So glad to see you did though :) Loved seeing Edward with his boys first time in awhile he'd been with him poor thing was all wound up. I wasn't expecting Marcus to show up on his doorstep and it was good Alice left to let him talk to him alone that was needed. Really glad he didn't try to start anything physically with Shortcake down the hall. Good thing Marcus told him Bella is in love with him sure that's something he wouldn't believe otherwise he was a super douche for being so degrading towards him that bugged me a lot but he was hurt so it makes sense but still. I love the picture he was looking at sounds lovely.
Bella coming over right after was so needed missed these two from the last update. Cuddling on the couch and talking then Edward asking her to stay the night I wasn't expecting that to escalate like it but like Bella I wasn't complaining haha Holy hot dry humping indeed Edward was so cute apologizing afterwards then asking her to be his LOVE IT her reply was perfect. LOVED the update thank you for this amazing story.
| Mountainnaire81 5/14/13 . chapter 17
There is a huge disconnect between the current version of Edward, and the Edward to whom we were first introduced (and still "see" when he's at the strip club and giving himself an erection in front of all the fawning women). The Edward in the first chapters enjoyed threesomes and apparently also anything that involved mindless sex, regularly got drunk and did drugs, hung around with seedy people, and didn't seem to mind that he was on the verge of becoming on over-the-hill stripper and used-up man whore. He also seemed really...dumb. If he really has turned into this sweet, talented sensitive father and lover, he should be repelled by that former version of himself, but he doesn't really seem to be. Bella, unless she's stupid, should also be concerned about his former life - or at least acknowledge it - especially with respect to the threat of disease. It would be a better story if they actually dealt with this issue. It's as if you're expecting us to ignore or forget things we've read in earlier chapters.
| thunnababy 5/16/13 . chapter 17
Love this so much.
| Guest 5/13/13 . chapter 17
Finally...they are officially together. I liked the Marcus scene. Bella has always maintained he's a decent guy, but we probably all assumed otherwise (like Edward). He came off as a guy who was hurt, but not bad.
Good chapter. :o)