|Reviews for Dancing In The Dark|
| Maplestyle 5/11/13 . chapter 17
Such a great chapter! I was shocked Marcus showed up. He actually took it better then I expected him to so I hope he doesn't do anything to Edward. Can't wait for more!
| CullensTwiMistress 5/11/13 . chapter 17
Marcus is an ass. An ass who didn't even remember Alice from (Christmas?) dinner.
Holy dry hump, indeed!
| saraamin 5/11/13 . chapter 17
Dang girl I missed you! Welcome back batman! Hihi at last they are officially together! Made my day! Thank you sweetpie
| Danatech 5/11/13 . chapter 17
I think Christina Perri sing this perfect for Coda's "Be Mine":
"I tried my best to never let you in to see the truth
And I've never opened up
I've never truly loved 'til you put your arms around me
And I believe that it's easier for you to let me go
I hope that you see right through my walls
I hope that you catch me, 'cause I'm already falling
I'll never let a love get so close
You put your arms around me and I'm home"
| jmcfall 5/11/13 . chapter 17
Lol that was some hot humpage lol that's not eve a word lol ! TY
| kleotwifrenzie 5/11/13 . chapter 17
Loved it! cannot wait for the next chapter!Thank you
| Midnight Cougar 5/11/13 . chapter 17
That was definitely hot . . . but I could FEEL the emotions from both of them. Perfect ending! "Be mine?" *swoon* Loved it! And I do feel bit bad for Marcus but I'm also glad he's out of the picture. Thanks for the update! xo
| twilightladies 5/11/13 . chapter 17
Good God that was awesome!
I kinda loved how the meeting with Marcus went. I thought he would be a total douche so it was nice to see how he's looking out for Bella.
And Coda, he is so unbelievably sweet. I adore how smitten he is, but I think he'll struggle when Bella goes to California.
Loved it - GREAT Chapter! xox
| Wheels2 5/11/13 . chapter 17
I do feel sorry for Marcus but it had to happen.
| Twifan1228 5/11/13 . chapter 17
| LaPumuckl 5/11/13 . chapter 17
I thought I'd die as Marcus appeared at Edwards door... That was one scary appearance!
But I'm glad they sorted shit out...
Damn... REUNION SEX, there now give them back together, please?
| jansails 5/11/13 . chapter 17
Marcus was really the gentleman overall.
Yes, Marcus said some bitter things about Edward, the hurt talking, maybe a little elitist prejudice too, but in the end he knew the truth & faced it.
Edward faces how he feels about Bella with trepidation, a little bit of reluctance, but hoards the thought of Bella loving him to his heart.
Twelve weeks will be a lot of changes in Shortcake, Bella will miss that.
| Errontrisha 5/11/13 . chapter 17
I kiss her forehead. "Be mine?" I murmur, unable to stop the words tumbling from my mouth.
She smiles. "I always have been."
GAH. He is the most adorable. I can't even.
Dry humping FTMFW :) I think they both needed that.
And Marcus! Wow! That showed guts turning up at Coda's place like that. I didn't peg him fur the punching kind so I'm glad that didn't happen.
| ecullensgurl 5/11/13 . chapter 17
Dry humping never sounded so good ;)
| Lyn63 5/11/13 . chapter 17
Wow...one hot dry hump ! At last they can be together :))