I wish you would continue this is a great story! WW

This is wonderful ... rest of it somewhere else? I hope?

Good writing. I don't usually enjoy screenplay layouts, but it's not distracting here. Well done.

dragon

please update.

i really enjoyed this story but what the hell happened at the end? it just stops suddenly wheres the rest? i was captured by your story from the word go though so i was even more disappointed when i realised that it wasnt finished.

this rules more please..

I love it, absolutely love it so far, please continue! Especially loved the mention of Farscape, good job! :)

Um... I'm sorry, where's the rest?

Oh my gosh! *I* almost cried when Gooshie died! I love that Alia is back, and I really like the storyline. Coolness.

Ha ha ha ha ha! I wasn't sure where this was going at first, but that was such a fantastic ending. I'm not a fan of romance, so the opener with Beth sort of blew past me, but the entire bar scene was marvelous. on to the next!

okay... I just read the trailer... Firstly, I'm SO EXCITED to see it's in the teleplay format, and secondly MAN!!! THAT IS AWESOME!!!! you MUST contact me. littlebuddha5@hotmail.com

SO GREAT!!!

So far, so good. Keep it up, I'm definitely interested!

Cool! You gotta write more, this story rocks!

Interesting. I am enjoying the story and I look forward to the next part!

"Dr. Jonathan Daniel "Johnny/JD" Beckett: CORIN NEMEC**" Good choice. Do I see a Stargate fan? Jonathan Daniel and the actor who plays Jonas.

Joy,
Your writing gets better every time I read it! This is great! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Good work! See you on the bboard!

Erin