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| Weird Wild 2005-04-24 ch 14, | abuseI wish you would continue this is a great story! WW |
| dragonhavn 2004-10-14 ch 14, | abuseThis is wonderful ... rest of it somewhere else? I hope? Good writing. I don't usually enjoy screenplay layouts, but it's not distracting here. Well done. dragon |
| egastin77 2004-02-07 ch 14, | abuseplease update. |
| verbinaalmighty 2003-07-17 ch 14, anon. | abusei really enjoyed this story but what the hell happened at the end? it just stops suddenly wheres the rest? i was captured by your story from the word go though so i was even more disappointed when i realised that it wasnt finished. |
2002-12-29 ch 11, anon. | abusethis rules more please.. |
| John L. 2002-09-26 ch 10, anon. | abuseI love it, absolutely love it so far, please continue! Especially loved the mention of Farscape, good job! :) |
| Tara Farrago 2002-09-26 ch 10, | abuseUm... I'm sorry, where's the rest? |
| Tara Farrago 2002-09-26 ch 9, | abuseOh my gosh! *I* almost cried when Gooshie died! I love that Alia is back, and I really like the storyline. Coolness. |
| Tara Farrago 2002-09-22 ch 4, | abuseHa ha ha ha ha! I wasn't sure where this was going at first, but that was such a fantastic ending. I'm not a fan of romance, so the opener with Beth sort of blew past me, but the entire bar scene was marvelous. on to the next! |
| Tara Farrago 2002-09-22 ch 1, | abuseokay... I just read the trailer... Firstly, I'm SO EXCITED to see it's in the teleplay format, and secondly MAN!!! THAT IS AWESOME!!!! you MUST contact me. littlebuddha5@hotmail.com SO GREAT!!! |
| Sarah C. 2002-08-25 ch 7, anon. | abuseSo far, so good. Keep it up, I'm definitely interested! |
| Stoko 2002-08-24 ch 7, | abuseCool! You gotta write more, this story rocks! |
| Teri 2002-08-17 ch 7, | abuseInteresting. I am enjoying the story and I look forward to the next part! |
| Teri 2002-08-17 ch 2, | abuse"Dr. Jonathan Daniel "Johnny/JD" Beckett: CORIN NEMEC**" Good choice. Do I see a Stargate fan? Jonathan Daniel and the actor who plays Jonas. |
| PQleaper 2002-08-01 ch 7, anon. | abuseJoy, Your writing gets better every time I read it! This is great! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Good work! See you on the bboard! Erin |