|Reviews for After the Nightmare|
| ArktonDartorix 4/21/13 . chapter 13
My god, this story was adorable. And you even managed to pull off some amazing Seiko shenanigans. D:
| smileplease91 1/7/13 . chapter 13
Oh my God. I loved this so much!
| Guest 12/28/12 . chapter 13
AMAZING! This story not only made, cry, giggle,and feel feelings I didn't know I had but it encouraged me to continue my writing after a long streak of depression, disintrest, and lack of inspartion. I hope this made you feel wonderful knowing you provided all this to a reader :) Also the story was detailed and the relationships progressed at a normal pace making this fanfiction less well, fictional! And don't we all want this stuff was real :p I enjoyed the shyness of the teens on moving there relationship farther (making me want to read more and me each chapter) and Seiko, he crazy and perverted friend who had to move everything along. Haha because frankly, that's how most teenage relationships start. With beers haha :) I also edmired how although this was a story about AFTER the nightmares of Heavenly Host, you stayed true to the charractors roots. Over all, WONDERFUL story and I look forward to more :)
| cryfan 12/12/12 . chapter 13
*claps* Great story! :D
| Mayu 12/12/12 . chapter 12
This has got to be one of the best Fanfics I have ever read in my life! Im so glad I found this! I cant wait for the next chapter!
| Bob 12/11/12 . chapter 11
I gotta say, I love this story, I love how things are going and how everyone is kept very well in character. There isnt awhole lot of Corpse party fanfictions out there. So to have found this wonderful story was nice. I cant wait to read what you guys come up with next, I really look forward to it.
With that being said, I sort of have to agree with szilla. He saved her countless times. Even jumped into a a pool even though he couldnt swim to save her, and just trying very hard to ensure her safety through out the whole ordeal, should count and mean more then one little mistake. He loves her so much and, he could have just kept it to him self and never have said anything. But the fact that he felt so guilty about it and did tell her shows that he really loves her so much. And is sorry for what hes done.
I can understand her being angry and all but they really didnt do anything THAT bad. Sure, they kissed, she took his shirt off and gave him a hickey, but its not like he tryed to rape her or anything. He didnt take her shirt off. And I'm sure he would have spoken up and stopped it before things got too out of control.
The fact that she just seemed to completely forget all that he has done for her just like that, and is so blind to how much he truly cares for her is a shame.
I know not every relationship is perfect and they all have there ups and downs. But I really do hope to see them back together soon. I would also like to see Ayumi maybe feelings guilty as well for just cutting him off like that and worry about whats happening to him now.
| SonicAndFriendsAreReal 12/13/12 . chapter 13
... And now we have reached the end. For some reason, though, I thought this would go on for another chapter or two. Oh well, we get a happy ending, anyway!
Thank you, GhastlyRevenant, for this great story! I very much enjoyed it!
Keep up the good work! :D
| blueflower1594 12/12/12 . chapter 13
I definetly loved this story and I can't wait for Mirror Image! However, I feel like this story needs an epilogue. I'm not just saying that because I love this story, I mean that from a reader's POV. I just feel like their are some loose ends to tie up, like the friends getting to see the duo together, Ayumi's parents banning her from seeing Yoshiki, that rich girl that Yoshiki was tutoring, things like that. But nonetheless, I still loved this story and can't wait for the next one!
| Aquarius Draco 12/12/12 . chapter 13
But, wait, is this really the end? Didn't Yoshiki have that tape when he left Heavenly Host? Did Morshiqe and Mayu hook up? WILL SEIKO EVER STOP BEING A PERV? (Okay, the last one was meant to be a joke, but it was bad and I'm sorry.)
Anyway, good luck with the next story and I can't wait until it comes out. Though... you guys could always post a couple one-shots before then. *nudge nudge wink wink*
| ReyScarlet 12/12/12 . chapter 13
When you had chapters 10 and 11 up, I felt like going crazy. Chapter 13 was simply amazing, I wish you wouldn't end it! ;.;
| Chibi-Awesome 12/12/12 . chapter 13
A great end to a wonderful story.
This is what I was waiting for! the moment they finally get back together, how it should be. I cant tell you how much I have enjoyed this story. I really hope there is a sequel to this showing they're graduation and life now.
Also, I might be wrong but, I do not remember reading about Mayu and Morishige hooking up, I would like to see more of there relationship as well.
Overall, this is one of the best storys I have read in a long time.
I cant wait for more from you guys.
| NeverRegretAnything 12/12/12 . chapter 13
Ahh! That's what I ment by 'lovey dovey'. I hope you're going to make another continuation of this. :) Because I literally just love you're stories. And I can com home from school and read them.
| seikoshinohara101 12/12/12 . chapter 13
KYAAAAA! You guys did amazing, I truly enjoyed this! When Yoshiki had tears in his eyes I had teary eyes myself, totally felt everything happening there. Can't wait till your next one! x3
| SonicAndFriendsAreReal 12/12/12 . chapter 12
*sigh* Ayumi... how can she be so smart and yet so foolish? In Heavenly Host, he protected her from so many things, and he was willing to sacrifice his life to save her, showing that he cares and loves her more than anything else in the world. He makes one mistake, one betrayal (and believe me, after a while, you get used to being betrayed), and all of that means nothing? And it didn't' even go very far, just kissing and a hickey (if they had sex, that would be understandable, but they didn't). Plus, isn't the fact that she's still holding such intense hatred of him and still thinking of him show that SHE cares?! Ugh!
... *laughs* The fact that this can makes feel this much and emotion and think about this... really shows that you're reading a great story!
Incredible job, GhastlyRevenant, and I look forward to continue reading this! :D
| Aquarius Draco 12/11/12 . chapter 12
Oh... oh... that thing Ayumi mentioned in your last story. Oh boy...
Agh, why are things so complicated? I just want to lock Ayumi and Yoshiki into the same room and leave them there for a few hours. Easier said than done, though.