Very nice chapter! Love the detail and everything else in between. ;) Hope that you update again soon, please!

Yay! Update soon!

Interesting. I understand Sage's disbelief perfectly. They've moved on without her, it seems.
Also, when referring to the American government, it'd be Congress. Parliament would be used when talking about the British government.

Nicely done, I wonder if Sage will try to free the actual President.

Great chapter! Update soon! I can't wai for more!

This sounds like a good start. I'm curious as to what the real Hawk would say when he finds out that Zartan busted Sage from prison.
Any chance you could write a bit from the Joes' or Storm Shadow's perspective? I think it would be interesting to get into his head a bit.

Still adore this story

Update soon please :)

Ei! I loved it! Does she know Zartan? Great chapter! Update soon! I can't wait for more! It was great! It was AWESOMAZING! I can't wait for next chapter! EI! The excitement is killing me!

Update sooon please :)

It's a pleasure. ;) Chapters make my day when I get to read them before school and have new material to daydream off of as I wait for the next one. It was a wonderful chapter and I am still loving the humor. Please update again soon!

Still lovin it!

Great chapter! Update soon! I can't wait for more! Hmmm...Do I sense a bit of sexual frustration between Sage and Storm? Hmmmm? XD Update soon!

I truly love your work and this story! Keep up the amazing work!

Very funny! Loved the chapter as always. ;) Very humorous and it brought a smile to my day! Thanks! Hehe! And hope that you can update again soon!