|Reviews for Everything In Between|
| whitedreams 5/21/13 . chapter 8
| inuyashalvrtoo 5/17/13 . chapter 8
I love your stories! This kinda reminds me of kaichou wa maid sama mixed in with my little monster-kun. Amazing writing you do yjete arent many good stories that are well written here on ffnt. So keep up the good work, by the way im glad you updated your storu hidden screams, I wish the real orhime could like that( after all tatsuki tauhht her karate)and her powers have improved. I had this idea of syoru but I just cant figure out how to put on papet. Prompt: orihime is back home and she has beem having the same nitemare of seeing her friends dead, the voice inside her is aizen. This is the line that he says at the end of the dream " its time to hide away the sun". So tell what you think.
| animeflunky 4/27/13 . chapter 8
Absolutely adorable story thus far. Orihime is trying so hard to resist Ichigo, but he had her from the very first time haha. Looking forward to reading more.
| Fist.Of.Fire 4/25/13 . chapter 2
I really admire the Ichigo in this story. He's cute and intense at the same time. Although, Mashiro has green hair, right? Then why did you mention her as a brunette? Well, anyways. I loved the development in IchiHime's relationship! :)
| Fist.Of.Fire 4/24/13 . chapter 1
I am finally reading this story of yours. At first I was surprised to find that Ichigo has BLACK hair and then when I read your author's note, it came out that you did so intentionally. You also say that the story would be three chapters long but its already on its 8th chapter. Hahahaha. It happens, I tell you. Well, the first chapter was good and I am interested in this a lot. I love to read your stories of IchiHime! :) :D
| naleah 4/24/13 . chapter 8
Oh thanks for the update... ita cool..
| OrihimeKurosakiInoue 4/24/13 . chapter 8
Hav! Poor Girls Their Stuck With 2 Hot Touchy Feely Boys... Although That Isnt A Bad Thing, Great Chap :)
Updatee Soon !
| Sele de la Luna 4/24/13 . chapter 8
Awwwwww I loved it...
I love Grimmjow and Mashiro pairing :3
Great chap! Please continue
Oh Poor Hime-chan she's got scolded... That Loly bitch..
| Dreigo ENG 4/24/13 . chapter 8
I must say this I just love ichigo here. He's such a cutie 3 I wonder what will Orihime do with her future.. it's looks like she going have hard time. Grimmjow and Mashiro... I never thought about them in this kind of relationship, but in EIB they have my aprrove xD
But what with poor Kensei? ugh... I don't know who should win Orihime heart... Him or Ichigo? OMG... I feel so saaad.
But chapter was great 3 3
| Grid 4/24/13 . chapter 8
This is probably one out my favorite stories here. I really do enjoy how you have written and created this universe for the characters especially for both Ichigo and Orihime. Those two kind of feels like a combo of Maid-sama and Gakuen Prince. I love how it appears as if Hime is starting to open up more to Ichigo and show him her feelings for him. As for Shiro, I was a bit surprised that she is sort of in a relationship with Grimmjow. I would have thought that if she was going to be with a guy, it probably would have been Kensei. I'm hoping that when he finds out, he won't feel betrayed or anything and act out due to everything. I can't wait until the next chapter.
| NinaSkylove 4/24/13 . chapter 8
Wow I love this story! At points I can't help but feel like ichigo and orihime have somewhat switched personalities and also tht rangiiku has turned into her isshin... but I absolutely love and enjoy it so far, the only thing I have to say is tht orihime's eyes are gray not brown
| 3 4/23/13 . chapter 1
Gregory and the Hawk! 3 Nice fic :)
| ChilledChaos 4/23/13 . chapter 8
OOh Loved it Kawaii can't wait for more update soon Star-sama! :D
| nypsy 4/23/13 . chapter 8
LOVED this chappy (re-reading 7 immediately before helped maintain the flow). NEVER imagined the pairing from this chap, but its adorable. gosh, i really am enjoying ori's journey into the world of allowing herself to feel, finally. as awful as feeling pain is, it lets us appreciate love, happiness, and all those other positives all the more. she did well in her first attempt an consolation and being supportive too-it serves to reason if she's such a smart girl, that she'll grasp the ins & outs of friendship quickly too. can't wait for other updates.
| Xtremefairy 4/23/13 . chapter 8
Amazing update :)