Poor Ochi :3

XD Too funny!

Ha! Narumi fainted! XD That was the best part, you're so awesome! 3

This is such a cute story! I just love it!

nice story u have here. hope u can post the next one!

Ya, well, this is embarrassing, but I can't do math at all. I misread your publish date and well ya, figure out what I wrote wrong on my review to the third chapter. Oh one more thing, reread your first chapter. There was a double word there somewhere near the end.

Not much complaining about the content here but... I've noticed the rate that you update. From your publishing date to your latest update date, twelve days. Not bad for three chapters. Not bad at all. However, I absolutely do not like short chapters. Hate them in fact. You know why? Because they lack the details. But anyways, from the time you've updated to the time I make this review, it is absolutely too damn long. (not that I should be saying since I half abandoned one of my stories, but that's not the point!) try to update ASAP. (given no writers block and such) longest I've gone without updating my 'big hit' story is less than two weeks. Woah, rambling a bit there. Ahem. So anyways, moral of this review is, update faster and make chapters longer! Anything else? I guess not. I kinda forgot who everyone is, given that I read BeautyPop in like 5th grade. Or was it 6th? Okay time to start a reread!

I really like your story! Please update soon :)

youre very funny! and nice! this is good even though it was short because you make us even more exited about how things are going to turn out. itd also be funny if kiri ends up being a model for the runway show, actually itd be HILARIOUS! hope you update soon and ill check your other stories, surely they are good because this one is as good as the others but short and that you do luck (;

Lol this was so funny so far please continue soon!

so awsome! hope you can get the next chapter fast!

please update soon! I really want to read more! Kiri and narumi are so interesting! XDXDXD

My question is that has Naru confessed yet? Hope u update again soon plz