Your poetry is very graceful in its rhythm and words.

Hey, hey...nice poem! I usually don't read poems and such, but since I started writing some, I began to read more. I really think that the poem gets to the more "human" element of the conflict, and that if you have any more stuff for Soul Calibur, especially character-specific stuff, it would be fun to read! Keep writing!

This reminded me so much of my former kendo teacher, Mr. Tachikawa. He told us similar stories of his ancestor, how he lost his true love to a fight and he wanted nothing more than revenge, and that's how combat came into the family. Very interesting that this sparked my attention. Thank you. Very good job on it! Keep going!

though i can't say i can relate to this, i'm still touched by the words you used and i can feel the raw solemness of this poem...

loved it~!