I've almost forgotten how much I love your Lucy/Loke. :]. I've got my fingers crossed that you'll continue!

The mayor's throat is broken. Illiterate conmen are my life.

Very interesting story! I loved the LoLu interactions very much and the ending is suspenseful almost like a breath of fresh air from the fluff... can't wait for your next update!

Please update
I think it a good start
So I wanna know what happens next!

I think I just died omg
Especially when Lucy got caught checking out Loke.
This is just so great and I love it.

happy ending ..

Wow this is great so far! The beginning is hilarious and then it ends all serious. And that last part- makes me anticipate the next chapter! Great job :D

Luv the story :)

Please, please update soon! I want to know what is going to happen next! This is really good so far!

Wow, this is incredible. Everyone is perfectly in character, and the Loke/Lucy dynamic is both hilarous and heart-tugging. Keep up the good work, I can't wait for the next chapter!

This is one of the few stories I've read yet that manage to employ Lucy's distinct brand of narration with an actual plot and potential. I commend you on it, and I can't wait to see where you take it from here!

i fell into fairy tail accidentally a couple weeks ago, became quite hideously obsessed, and then promptly began COMBING THE INTERNETS for ficcery.

you're my first stop, naturally, because of course you are, and HERE IS THIS SHINY PRESENT, JUST FOR ME.

DENY IT NOT, I KNOW BETTER. I PUT OUT THE VIBES AND YOU DELIVERED.

i don't think there's a single character or permutation of characters i *wouldn't* read about for this fandom, because they're all so hilariously f*cking cracked, but i am muchly of the rabid liking for the loke/lucy set-up you've laid out herein. ('herein.' delusions of fancypants ye've got there, mr. word-thing, don't get shirty with ME.)

MEANWHILE.

there's really no point picking out individual lines or bits of dialogue to regurgitate back at you for Muy Impressed pointing & flailing purposes, because every gottdamn line has me snort-chortle-wheezing uncontrollably, but i WILL say that of all that is wonderful from this chapter (and that is Everything), i most particularly lovinged the in-guild scene -erza's imminent de-virginizing plans divulged in her typical Straight-Man style had me rolling, plus the juvia-licking, oi.

FROTHYMOUTHLIKE I SHALL BE WITH MY ANTICIPATION FOR NEXT INSTALLMENT, YOU FABULOUS HUMYNLADYMA'AM.

Good story. Lucy's touble is so funny. Poor her. The end of this chapter was like a cold shower.

This is shaping up to be really interesting! I feel that you've captured the feeling of the characters very well and I'm eagerly looking forward to what you'll write next.

This sounds really good so far. I'm looking forward to reading more. )