Well, you did well. Not many can fill in a spot in the Tolkien stories and come away with success. Very well done of you

Great story but there was one tale about Bandobras Took. He perform a great deed.

Very nice. Gandalf and Thorin's interactions and arguments were very much in character.

Well done!

That was really good! I love how well you write the interactions of the characters! I'm glad to have read this but with it's end, and until you update your other story, there aren't any of your stoyies left to read! DX

I hope you write more soon, because you are without a doubt, the best Hobbit fanfiction writer on this site. Be proud of yourself! ;D

P.S. I also wouldn't complain if you chose to write some Lord of The Rings fanfiction, that fandom would do a world of good with you contributing. C;

A nice bit of gapfilling on what might have changed Bilbo's mind during the night in the movie. I think you captured both Thorin's and Gandalf's voices well.

Awesome! Keep it up! ;)

omg, this was great!